Why is eddie in outlast, isnt he from the whistleblower. Isnt like the main chaser in outlast chris?
He developed the main characters that needed particular attention, like Eddie Gluskin, the perfect host that the Walrider used as a conduit to enter the world. Abused as a boy, Eddie became a serial killer by his adolescence, eventually being taken prisoner by the Murkoff sect who explored his psychology and history which could be found in a variety of notes hidden around the compound. Called 'the groom,' Eddie was obsessed with the idea of getting married, but due to the Asylum being an all-male facility could only turn to his other inmates to facilitate his wish. He would mutilate them in an attempt to alter their appearance towards what he considers to be a perfect woman.
Fantasy · Bor902
Yay, thanks for the chapter!
ch 14 Chapter 14: How its going
Fantasy · Bor902
Hei author, what is the upload schedule for this novel?
ch 13 Chapter 13: How its going
Fantasy · Bor902
The plant above ground can get fairly big
Five minutes later, the potato seedlings had grown to half a person's height.
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
Five minutes later, the potato seedlings had grown to half a person's height.
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
The only time the it was a female pronoun used was when the preist was introdused and it said preistess the rest of the times this caracter has been mentioned it was with male pronounces.(sorry for bad english)
He vaguely remembered that when he inherited the priesthood, the flame he ignited in the stone brazier was only a few inches high. However, the former priest praised him and said he would lead the tribe to prosperity.
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
Wouldnt she be his niece and not his cousin?
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Movies · BananaPancke
Original female? Maybe…
I saw a bunch of Shadinja waiting for us beside Hades, Phantump, and our female Shadinja. Shadinja (OF) introduced them as the elders of their tribe. They requested to be shown the blessed space that Shadinja (OF) mentioned and promised to lead the whole tribe there if it was true. Honestly, their request, or rather the offer they gave in return, took me off guard. Here I was hoping that I would be able to persuade a fourth or third of the tribe to join me, but they were directly offering themselves up in a wholesale manner.
Anime & Comics · Azrail93
TFTC!
ch 13 Chapter 13: How its going
Fantasy · Bor902
Really like the novel, a really good take on the game developer «plot». Thanks for the chapters! :)
ch 12 Chapter 12: First Thoughts on Adaptation
Fantasy · Bor902
*interesting
ch 0 2 Landing
Fantasy · Vexis
I thought that the power system was fairly interesting, his «relationship» with that girl felt like a little rushed but you wrote it in a way that made it feel less rushed (if that makes sense). I dont quite remember how the system worked but he received blueprints like way to easily. Anyways, if you feel like rewriting then you do that. I for one believe that you potentially have a good story here. Ps. Apologies if this was hard to understand. English is my third language.(and im writing on my phone)
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Body Mender
Sci-fi · Plottergeist
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Thanks for the chapter. I think the math with the skill points arent completly correct( they dont make sense for me atleast). And the fact that they are called skill point and then they are used to increase stats is strange( consider changing the name or dont if there is another reason for the name). Nice book, fairly good grammar(some mistakes, but we’re only human)
ch 0 3 One Of Many
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Fantasy · Gray_3716