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This... is good stuff.

Otherwise, Great chapter!

You should also probably have the Woodsmen, Hunters, Adventurers, Etc; teach your Army a thing or two. So then if there ever separated from the army/captured and escape, they can scavenge/hunt for food, find footprints and other such ways of tracking. And, overall, find their own way back to your land or the Army. Plus, Stealth. Should also see if there are Mindless monsters (not fairy tale creatures, I mean like creatures that don't even think (either by the lack of intelligence, or their thought process of think after due) before ripping someone in half to eat their flesh) that way you could make something like an Adventures Guild; for those who want combat/are willing to risk their lives for enough money/achievements, but will also want to be free enough that they won't be in the army. Because while the world was expanded upon, in the Shrek series; your very existence there, as well as your actions, have made it so that this world is an au. And as such, can have a whole lot of different stuff that isn't in the original series.

When they get powerful enough/you want to do it, you could honestly pull a DarkWolfShiro. AKA, have the original create a copy of themselves; and put said copy in the same situation they were in, but don't let others outside of said Universe/Multiverse (because Dragon Ball be like that, with separate timelines and universes being a cannon thing) intervene. Basically having the story play out, without being interrupted by the wider Multiverse.

2 Things. 1. Great Chapter! 2. Yeah, keep thinking that buddy. Because, it took a whole long while for Humanity to attain space travel (in which they were focusing almost entirely on Humanity for their power, you did have them for a while, it didn't help that they were catatonic for a long time; until the 4th sibling came) in the original. But, with Laharl here, making it so they work together, and don't just focus on humans and instead on anything they can get power from. They are so much more powerful, and so much more numerous than their original counterpart.