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Vijay_Shanker
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Vijay_Shanker
I think you make Long tian with a system & a heroin.y did u criticize ur own hero like a .
Vijay_Shanker
Good work but also not good to get many interest
Vijay_Shanker
Come on,please.And also add some love relationship.
Vijay_Shanker
Are u expanding a summary with any words.
Vijay_Shanker
please,continue on like this.It's very interesting .
Vijay_Shanker
your story title is interesting..But y r u narrate the full of 30 chapter with same concept.Don't involve too much bragging technique.
Vijay_Shanker
you are wasting 19 chapters of this concept and making half of the readers lost its interest
Vijay_Shanker
what kind of story start with this concept?
I want to know about y did u lower the system value and give importance to harem based things.From start to end u only give importance to womens and other low activity. sorry for the offends.
Quest-based Magnate
Urban · Preschool Expert