Hunnybunny69

Thanks for the chapter, a great fight scene

I like the way you used to introduce the new dungeon layout to us, thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter, the descriptions fit in nicely though sometimes they could be more concise, for example instead of saying there's a whole animal roasting, you could just say there's a pig roasting.... something like that

Jeez, that's a brutal idea. But in order for that to succed the oerson you're using it on would nedd enough iron or other netals in their body.... I don't know if the amount a normal human body has is enough. But it probably does

Thank you for the chapter If I could contole any fantasy element it would hopefully be water. I think with enough controlw ober it ou could potentially just completely drain a human body

Thank you for he chapter An auxiliary chaptwr would definitely be nice to have

Still I must admit that for some draft chapter these are already very good, especially the first few. Writing many chapters after one another can often worsen the quality of the last ones. Taking small breaks between writkng the chapter might prove usefull in impoving the overall quality even more. But this is only a suggestion, I found that small breaks help me when I write stuff, which is not very often. But still I suggest you give it a try once you find yourself in a better place of mind and spirit. I pray for your betterment and thank you wholeheartedly for this chapter as well.