I love it from what I've read so far Hope it gets better as way of the devil The author previous work.
Why does the name talisman master change every chapter? Now it's rune master.
why did you change the name of the soul skill 🤔
I like the novel. My only problem is when you translate you make a lot of mistakes with the genders. You're call in the women most of the time, he or his
I love these parents.
Use it me o why do they keep mention in? He left the village that was so long ago. Why do they have to go Back so far It's just Useless repetition By going so far back all the time.
I find the translations ok, my only Problem is You keep mixing the genders Up
Why are you calling a male character of female? You should get this fixed.
You made a mistake, you said the Slingshot could barely Stand the pressure. But he used full power And It could Handle it
Even though Lu Ming pulled the slingshot with all his strength, the slingshot barely withstood the force—this meant that this slingshot could unleash Lu Ming's full strength.
Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea
I don't like what his doing why kill them before you know who will Survive taking the pill
Immortality Cultivation: I Can increase My Stats Using Clansmen's Qi-Blood
Eastern · Centenary Cattle