Feldman

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2021-10-07 Bergabung Global
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Feldman
Feldman
7 months ago
Commented

Somehow better and worse than original attribute … good balance. Good job author on actually starting with a semblance of balance

Effect: You will not feel any negative emotions; damage you deal with "frost" elements permanently increased by 20%; you cannot be killed by damage with "frost" elements.

Super Righteous Player

Super Righteous Player

ACG · Not praying for ten strings

Feldman
Feldman
Feldman
10 months ago
Commented

This is so true

A lot of knowledge, which you thought you had fully grasped during the learning process, often brings new and different insights during the teaching process.

Becoming a Wizard by Starting From the Mind Closure Technique

Becoming a Wizard by Starting From the Mind Closure Technique

Fantasy · Bodhisattva Hammer

Feldman
Feldman
10 months ago
Commented

The quality of the writing has vastly diminished. It used to be a fun and funny story, now it’s just power ups and low effort battles …

Feldman
Feldman
11 months ago
Commented

Oh my gosh this is so funny!!

Yellow Ox remained brute and crude with its actions. It trampled on Zuo Jun's head four times. This time, it was two times more than the last time.

The Sacred Ruins

The Sacred Ruins

Eastern · Chen Dong

Feldman
Feldman
11 months ago
Commented

Oh my god, I just spit out my coffee

Yellow Ox unhurriedly approached Zuo Jun. It gave him a meticulous scrutiny, then suddenly, it turned on its trusty old hooves and forcibly trampled the man's head.

The Sacred Ruins

The Sacred Ruins

Eastern · Chen Dong

Feldman
Feldman
11 months ago
Commented

?????

Du You had already decided to risk it. Mandrake is a type of traditional Chinese medicine used as an anesthetic, and the potency of its sedative effect is very powerful. Too much can be lethal. Mandrake also goes by another name: Mandrake. This is something he remembered from his days of curiosity.

Era of the transmigrating earth

Era of the transmigrating earth

Eastern · Stars Fall

Feldman
Feldman
11 months ago
Commented

That was actually pretty funny

"Dogsh*t, this isn't something an ordinary human can do!" Lumian cursed and lay on the bed.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Feldman
Feldman
11 months ago
Commented

Here is my feedback, don’t do other perspectives (third person etc) it ruins the pacing of the story. Good novels don’t do that. Keep up with regular posts and story will do well. Another thing, don’t let things ramp up too quickly. I feel like story has already massively increased in pace

Feldman
Feldman
1 years ago
Commented

Aaaaand we are back to Mongrol being weaver

"Well… for starters, was Weaver a man or a woman?"

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree