BOKC_Trvll

BOKC_Trvll

male LV 11
2021-09-22 Bergabung Global
Lencana 7

Moments 220
BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 days ago
Posted

I really like this. overall it's good but the names are inconsistent. sometimes the character names are swapped with each other, or the names completely change. some of the charcters have been called 3 different names and I'm not sure sometimes of who it is until later in the chapter. the update stability is great.

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
19 days ago
Commented

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Naruto glared at Sasuke, "You took it without his permission and used it in a move of your own. That's a blatant sign that you don't respect others for their hard work. Lee put a lot of effort into learning those moves, and for you to just copy them shows you don't appreciate just how powerful they are."

Naruto: Winds and Changes

Naruto: Winds and Changes

Anime & Comics · William777

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
2 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter. I can already see that his transformation is going to bring some bs in the future

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 months ago
Commented

great chapter. also I hope you succeed.

"I didn't know humans could use magic. Those were some stellar moves," Amethyst said, complimenting us. Jessica and I smiled, but remembering the ongoing situation, we quickly moved away from her, running toward Funland. Amethyst's voice faded into the background as I barely caught her saying, "Sorry for nearly killing you!"

Steven Universe: The GuildMaster

Steven Universe: The GuildMaster

TV · chaoticCatholic

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 months ago
Commented

cool chapter. good luck at basic

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 months ago
Commented

cool chapter love the different POVs and personalities

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 months ago
Commented

nice chapter 👍

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 months ago
Commented

another banger. thanks

BOKC_Trvll
BOKC_Trvll
3 months ago
Commented

Great chapter. they should be able to catch up to the gems fairly quick.