Nadhir_Ken

Enough with the wasted chapters on romance. =_=

can you be any slower at releasing chapters ?....

you made à mistake in focusing only on the story of one legion at a time. there is nothing interesting about a character that has it all and is constantly acting like a spoiled brat. there is no stuggle, no mystery no story. it would have been more interesting to just combine the "childhood" of all légions on one ark and focus only on the interesting bits. the MC already had a loving family with his original body. and he still duscarded them thats why all this stupid family dynamique is just a pointless wanted of tokens. basically filler. I didn't like how youbhave explain every single little thing about your world to the reader. it takes away any sense of intreague or mystery from the story and is boring to read. the story would have been more interesting if the MCs original body went into à coma because if à mistake in the réincarnation proceadure or à punishment. and the 8 sool fragments had fraglemeted memories and had to figure things out for themselves. now that's an interesting story. then they work together to reach goodhood and finally be able to reach the original body in the void and finaly fuse together and awaken as the ultimat being just in time for the age of conquest. the MC influenced by his different lives and human experiences awakens from the grip of greed and realizes that he has been influenced by the memories of the demon he absorbed long ago and vows to do better. that's called caracter development. what you're doing now is just acting like a writer. good bye.