I think that by the rules of the 100, he should be punished for endangering the people who were with him and potentially making the Grounders enemies to the rest of the 100. Although if there is no punishment he could do something that makes him die faster and make Raven get him out of her head, I prefer this option xd.
Very good doing this fanfic based on the other one, I really hope you continue, and as a fan of the Nasuverse I hope for several old people and heroes for your faction, if you can not rush so much for the canon and make the mc go after his patriate throughout history like miyamoto musashi, okita souji, Artoria or mordred, Jeanne d'Arc, etc. Keep going man
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Now, I'm really looking forward to the rewrite with Jean. And if you can say Jean's maximum power level would be MCU or multiversal level? since she is very strong as a phoenix host and it looks a bit bad for an alpha like wolverine to be weaker than her, but good luck with the rewrite.
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Thanks for the chapter, the beginning was really good. So he's in a world that's full of animes from other animes but with a focus on DxD and since he doesn't know anything about the work, apparently he'll have a system which is really good if he wants to fight future threats. Then he now has Grayfia and we see the whole plot of things like time which I think is stupid and I only see a good scenario, he went back in time because of Trihexa or ExE, or the future ended, and this present is now what matters like: "I'm going to send some things to the past to help with this or whatever". Anyway, it's just the first chapter with a lot of information, but I liked the chapter and how it started, which makes me want to keep reading to know better in future chapters.
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Thanks for the chapter
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Thanks for the chapter, finaly a fanfic about that work and a slice of life type, keep doing and don't drop :3
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Thanks for explaining what I had doubts about, I haven't actually read or watched DxD, my knowledge is from fanfic so I was totally wrong in the aspects but ok, my criticism and what would be for the future was more to see my doubts regarding the future so that you don't end up with the fanfic in the middle and etc, and it's totally ok about the things about rage powerup which makes sense since this is a new life and he doesn't know anything about the anime.
If there is no X-Man then will Storm and Jean still have their powers? I hope so, but the problem is about Jean and a multiverse level phoenix inside her, I don't know how far it would go until this fanfic, if it goes until Thanos then don't involve the phoenix and if you go further, for example, Dormammu, Galactus and the Celestias, which I think would be too much, a good story until the end of Thanos would be better even because of the MC's powers depending on how much he could strengthen, Very good story continues like this.
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The problem with the MC's power in the future is the events compared to the canon, where Issei always faces enemies much stronger than him and wins. Ex: Kokabiel and Loki, both have thousands of years of experience and an ultimate class with 10 wings and the other is a God on par with Odin, I think in the canon he is older than Thor. The power levels don't explain much in the canon, but it also never explained how exactly Issei's boost works, which made the community not complain so much about him beating the villains. But you have an MC who can't get stronger until I think 2 years after the beginning of the plot, assuming that Rias and Sona are 16 years old. So how would he be useful assuming he doesn't have an extra power, I don't see him having a high class demonic power beating against ultimate and gods which in my opinion high class to ultimate class has a qualitative increase, but that's just the beginning, and as you're going to change the way the power levels are already shown in the auxiliary chapter, I hope that in the future he doesn't win the fights with the power of love/anger/friendship/plot armor.
Welcome back, thanks for the chapter
Martial Peak: Transmigration With A System
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