Webnovel Author: AuthorISan - Fanfic Collection

Wow a 5 star review from the author, what a surprise! Honest, so far with being 3 real chapters in at 5 more planned I think this fanfic so far is about 4. Mainly because of update stability as I have work and also taking summer classes for college so its a little iffy. Please note about the bee movie script, it is there purely for word count and will be removed once I pass 15k words written myself. I just want to know what you guys think and where I could improve in my writing

a very unique take on a BNHA fanfiction. love the implementation of GOH elements along with a quirk that's perfect for the MC. writing quality is better than most things published on this platform and the story development is going at a perfect pace. keep up the work and I'll be awaiting more.

only thing i could wish for out of this is if there were more frequent chapter updates.................................................................

why ntr? out of every genre you could have picked it was cuck and ntr........................................................................................

most likely this used to be a one piece novel but got dropped and the author used this page to post a new fanfic after deleting the chapters from the other one

Writing Quality: Seems really good, doesn't seem to have any noticeable mistakes that will cause you to have to re-read it. Update Stability: updates seem to be frequent with enough time in-between them. It seems the author prepares 3 chapters and posts them 1 hour apart each. Story development: MHA where it seems like females are dominants over men, a common fanfic idea. Development seems to be going at a nice rate not going to fast or slow. Character Design: MC is a OC!Izuku where he has a terrible mother which causes him to have a lot of trust issues and built up emotion, hopefully we can see some improvement with the help of UA when the author get's there. World Background: MHA world where woman dominate over men, Men seem to be treated poorly while woman are cast upon a high pedestal. Some characters seem to be gender-bent such as Katsuki and All-Might (Maybe Endeavor to but I didn't seem an indication.). Personally I like this type of background because the character personality's for people beside Inko and Izuku doesn't seem to be changed to much which is nice I hope you enjoyed my review, definitely going to keep reading this if it continues nicely

I do very much like this but it is confusing to keep track of what's happening. i dont mind the OP MC and like how your telling his backstory on where he is today but when you make a flashback chapter every other chapter it gets really confusing to keep track of what's happening in the present time.

Writing Quality: Very Good, not sounding like a Chinese novel translated Update Stability: Seems very often with a good break in-between each update to ensure quality, very appreciated Story Development: a little to fast past but its fine as it's made up with the writing quality, story development is good and definitely has potential to be one of the better danmachi fics on webnovel Character Design: MC is a simp for hephaestus BUT he is a good simp. He's not over bearing or overly-possessive but is kind, compassionate and treats her as an equal. He is also confident but not overly so and knows when to stop. He is also very cautious of other gods and even informs hephaestus about Freya as Syr, he also knows not to be scammed by Loki. World Background: Danmachi a great world and has a lot of potential within it and i'm glad to see it being used

Ya know, I wish i could write a full detailed review on it but i can't because the single word i think of after reading this is amazement. I really hope this keeps going strong because my god is this fucking good.

Writing Quality: Use Grammarly to fix it Update Stability: one of the only reasons this isn't 1 star Story Development: Way to fast paced, Luffy wanting to become a marine? Character Design: Mc takes over luffy's body AFTER he meets shanks and decides to become marine admiral, his was of speaking is terrible and only has 1-2 good moments World Background: the other reason this isn't 1 star, it's one piece