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AXJB
AXJB
14 days ago
Commented

it should be suspended not expelled

"Mrs. Gallaghar, Mr. Carpenter, and Mr. Taylor, the school will investigate the video, and until then, all of your sons will be expelled. Now, please leave my office. I've had enough shock for one day, which might not be good for my old heart," the Principal said.

Game in Marvel

Game in Marvel

Movies · thelightedghost

AXJB
AXJB
17 days ago
Posted

Love the story its got a steady pacing so its not too fast or slow, the characters are likeable and has some nice family moments which are nice to see, but the main this is it actually focuses on the game development.

AXJB
AXJB
17 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, cant wait for the next

AXJB
AXJB
17 days ago
Commented

Iv said it before but I love how supportive they are of him, its a nice change instead of them always being against or neutral

Zanichi chuckled, ruffling his son's hair. "Like I said, son—you don't need to worry about that. I want to help you achieve your dream. Besides, once your company takes off, you'll be making far more than what I've given you. Right?"

Another world Game Developers in Japan`s 1991

Another world Game Developers in Japan`s 1991

Video Games · Zaborn_1997

AXJB
AXJB
17 days ago
Commented

I really like the pacing of the story so far its not too fast and not too slow so its keeping me engaged, the main thing I'm wondering about is why is he not getting them patented, until he does others could steal his tech and there would be nothing he could do about it, as its something that is so revolutionary people would with out a second thought

AXJB
AXJB
17 days ago
Commented

I really love how supportive his dad is and is using it as a learning opportunity for his son, it shows he cares and respects him

AXJB
AXJB
2 months ago
Commented

Whoop, glad you are choosing an world that is not the MCU or some other over used one as the second world.

Because the world he was heading to was none other than World of Warcraft.

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Book&Literature · bobthewriter

AXJB
AXJB
2 months ago
Commented

other universes are ok, but it needs to one have a way to drive the plot forward, also should be more like an ark where she stays there for a bit, also if she does then she shouldn't be immediately one of the strongest things there, there should be a challenge, whether that is an opponent or an issue to contend with. That being said there is a lot you could do in the hp world first

AXJB
AXJB
2 months ago
Commented

I noticed before that he referred to Alaric as a Muggle, not a Muggleborn, why is that as a Muggle is one without magic?

—How is that possible? He is so young and a Muggle at that. It's one thing to have such high magical skills, but to possess such high magic power? 

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Book&Literature · bobthewriter

AXJB
AXJB
2 months ago
Commented

Yh, don't get discouraged, if you are not sure about a chapter maybe next time put a disclaimer first so people know and you will hopefully get more constructive feedback, also please keep the sub, it's not something you see all the time, or even having them be a switch, it's a nice change of pace.

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