other universes are ok, but it needs to one have a way to drive the plot forward, also should be more like an ark where she stays there for a bit, also if she does then she shouldn't be immediately one of the strongest things there, there should be a challenge, whether that is an opponent or an issue to contend with. That being said there is a lot you could do in the hp world first
I noticed before that he referred to Alaric as a Muggle, not a Muggleborn, why is that as a Muggle is one without magic?
—How is that possible? He is so young and a Muggle at that. It's one thing to have such high magical skills, but to possess such high magic power?
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
Yh, don't get discouraged, if you are not sure about a chapter maybe next time put a disclaimer first so people know and you will hopefully get more constructive feedback, also please keep the sub, it's not something you see all the time, or even having them be a switch, it's a nice change of pace.
It was a bit out of left field, I dont mind the mc being a sub in the bedroom but it should be consensual, that last chapter was her essentially becoming a slave, which could be a interesting plot point if done correctly with her breaking free and getting revenge, but the skill think made it feel to easy and her two accepting, even if she is a succubus it was a bit random, the relationship with the futa centaur could still be done but in a more consensual and better flowing way, maybe its her making amends by helping them (not sexually) and the two becoming closer that way.
I think you did the MP wrong if thats the calculation, 15*4*30 is 1800, 15*30 is 450
|Int: 15 (Mp= Int*Lev*30)
A Gamer Challenge Fucked Me Over
Book&Literature · RavenGoddess
Its is wrong, if you use that, 0*4*20 is 0 so her hp would be 0 and if con was 1 then at level 4 hp would be 80 using that calculation
|Con: 0 (Hp= Con*Lev*20)
A Gamer Challenge Fucked Me Over
Book&Literature · RavenGoddess
I have been to the Cologne Cathedral and I can say its really cool, better than any others I have seen in person
"I don't know exactly, but there is a cathedral I'm taking inspiration from. Do you know about the Cologne Cathedral? I haven't seen it in person, but I do know about it and have seen pictures of it. It's the coolest cathedral in my opinion. You have to have seen it at least once on the internet or something."
The Time I Reincarnated as the King of Knights?!
Anime & Comics · BeIi4l
Bit confused here, if its a joust then its 1v1 not a free for all, and they would use jousting lances not combat ones, the goal was to unhouse the opponent, the joust was more about skill and showmanship, the melee is the more combat focused one where more people would fight and its a free for all generally, it really depends on the tourney, in the future it would be good to layout the structure of them. Also this information is based of jousting and tourneys in my areas history, different places have different customs and layouts.
At the moment their lances crossed with the Loras, he effortlessly parried with his right hand, deflecting the Loras' lance and causing it to collide with the second knight's lance.
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
They do not have titles such as Duke, its Lord or in his case Lord Protector of The Reach
Ser Loras was the youngest son of the Duke of Highgarden and the Warden of the South, Mace Tyrell.
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
Whoop, glad you are choosing an world that is not the MCU or some other over used one as the second world.
Because the world he was heading to was none other than World of Warcraft.
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Book&Literature · bobthewriter