pankaj12407

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pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Commented

what so bold about?

Su Bai rubbed his eyes. He made a bold guess after ensuring he did not see things.

Simplified Beast Evolution Path

Simplified Beast Evolution Path

Fantasy · Pokemon Zhu Zi

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

like this novel. It's interesting to see the main character growth. I would recommend to read this novel. You can give try. leveling system also good.

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

I have read the novel till now. I can confidently say that I really like mc stance. He doesn't do unnecessary thing. He fully try reap others without harming them. I can say that author keep going whole heartedly.

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

Novel is good but it sometimes feels like too slow. And level system is really good. I would say yeah give try. Author is really trying in this novel.

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

Novel is good but MC talk too much. And too much care free. Author writing is good. But MC little frustrating. He doesn't understand his situation.

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

I really like the novel in the start but the author is too much dumping knowledge like crazy. You don't need to explain same thing everytime. MC talk too much.

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Replied to Alvern

but it's not strong as the Karna's earings and Kawach.

"I will grant you the armor and earrings that hold the blessing of the Knight Of The Sunlight! Its name is ‹Phoenix's Embrace›!" With a loud and powerful voice, the tree announced.

I Will Kill The Author

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Replied to

kawach and kundal

"I will grant you the armor and earrings that hold the blessing of the Knight Of The Sunlight! Its name is ‹Phoenix's Embrace›!" With a loud and powerful voice, the tree announced.

I Will Kill The Author

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

I was really expecting to be good novel but the character and world building are shit. MC is going just like flow that's all. He doesn't do anything himself.

pankaj12407
pankaj12407
1 years ago
Posted

this is fucking disgusting write about Mahabharata and playing with your fucking system. You are fucking insulting the believe of the people. How can you right this idiot. you have to understand that you can't show your creativity in this, seriously...