Robert_Hart_8185

interesting system but the story is slow and boring as all that happens is getting points and cultivating.

Ok. His mask was destroyed in the fight but it's still hiding his grimace? and we get it already. everything and everyone is enigmatic.

I think it's because he has 4 self geno cores.

God story but the rambling explanations are getting annoying and slowing down the story. If this continues I will stop reading.

I hate stories that go onto to much detail or use multiple unconventional words to describe a scene just for word count. All that does is cause people to lose interest in the story cause it takes forever to describe one attack or action. sorry but deleting this from my library

I hate when chapters repeat. if it happens again I will drop the book

love the story so far it's great that you don't go overboard with the details I hate books that into too much detail

so far I like the story but it is a bit slow and the long rambling explanations are a bit annoying

ok I have been trying to look past all the long winded explanations because I like the story but I can no longer ignore them when it takes 10 chapters to finish 1 fight. I will no longer read this story as it is a waste of my time and money

getting tired of the long rambling thoughts and explanations. taking over half a chapter to make 1 simple decision is a waste of your time and ours.