Horribly translated and seems to be a low effort work if you aren’t a native English speaker it might be palatable but my suggestion is to go to the proofreading Reddit and find someone to proofread for you.
People are evil my guy since there are acts like grape and abuse that give no benefit and people still do it just want to clear that up not trying to dog on you for it
Don’t know why people are so negative it’ a narrative based on the fact that he is cowardly but wants to learn magic it’ sorta built in to follow along all he does is train learn and try to live his life and there is nothing wrong with that although I do agree on the not reporting or at least fighting against the detention from mcgonnagall seems a bit to much for me but other then that great book
Why even have him interact with humans then why not other non human as that contradicts the story line of nonhumans being treated like trash and even having trouble going to school or finding jobs
Moreover, his soul has already changed too much to be considered human, so even his base form will not be human. His race is Endermen/[Redacted].
HP: Magic of the End
Book&Literature · Simple_Russian_Boi
The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book
Please bro it’s a good story just more chapters plzzzzz
Great novel hope you keep up with the updating it is great and I really want to see your take on the DxD world and how Ban will affect it.👌🏾✨
Mabye don’ read it then cause I think it’s a great thought and also it’s not ban it’ s someone with bans abilities so still cool homie.
Not trying to “uhm actually” you or anything but that is a genuine spelling for a word called that means to complain persistently and in a peevish or irritating manner hope it helps.
His aunt knelt down and hemmed up the edges at the back. 'What is it your father says? Oh yes. "Watch the whinging." Wonderful phrase. Lift up your arms.'
Harry Potter The New Lord Black
Book&Literature · Nebula_Scribe