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A blue shadow from his eyes + that not even a drop of blood will touch him? maybe, and as for other women who are considered enough, ninjas have 1 wife and 1 husband. Women also don't want to share partners (I think), so that's how it is.

So I see you've decided on Freya and Asfi.... okay, but you can also add Riveria, the hero saves beauty or something, I think that would be the limit, more is not better, because we have 2 princesses and 1 goddess, that's enough. about the chapters, okay, at first I thought you forgot that gods detect lies, but you remembered, I'm touched. his weapons, I'm wondering... why not give him the god of war set: shield (earth), blades of chaos (fire), Leviathan (water), and this spear (wind), please tell me what you think about it

or maybe just freya? because, you know, she is extremely possessive and will do a lot to get something, but on the other hand, this will happen when she is completely rejected, so she can be 1 wife, and after the "marriage" you can give something like unity of souls, or some other way for immortality or earlier, I say she is 1 because she is a goddess of beauty, fighting and probably fertility, she cannot be worse than others as a goddess of fighting. these are my thoughts

this story is so true that I think you experienced it yourself, but there should be some relaxation, e.g. a solo player game, a calm, non-tactical game or an adventure game, such as solitaire, or a long-forgotten game of mines or something like that

I just thought, if he knows the word energy, he will be able to do many things, because you know, the world is made of atoms, he will turn coal into diamonds with little effort, send lightning to himself first to level up, and then to enemies and so on

I would just like to point out that Brom's prophecy goes something like this: you will fail at everything except 1 thing, and that thing will make up for all your future and past failures. that thing is the saphira egg that he managed to get

will he have feelings for someone? will the oracle see his runes? or maybe he will be able to see the runes of others through the eye of an observer?

no problem, we understand that life is getting in the way of your writing, well at least I am

good, but dialogues shorten the overall content of the chapter, so 2/10 information in this chapter and overall plot, I think, conversation 9/10, because the chapter is short

I don't really like this flaw, but if you want it's your fanfic, and if he has a debt how does he repay it, or maybe they order him to do something and he does it like a slave of debt until it drops to 0, the harder, longer, more complex the request/task the more percentage he loses? and if he reversed this flaw how will you handle it? I'm interested, or maybe you'll be the next author who ended up at the beginning of the novel