Alright love the book. 1. the whole system needs fixing, instead of knights and mage(it conflicts alot with other elements of the book) have aura and magic(mana is universal so leave it) 2. cant be a magic and aura user at the same time (unless with special classes/cases) it confuses alot of people when seeing someone elses status. 3. mc has all attributes ( use ather as a more compact, destructive and corrosive version of mana(so just change that he has all attributes because his core and aura was built with it just make it that his core converts it to ather then mana then magic get the drift) 4. since classes and attributes are from blessings and experiences be more discriptive with the class than just simple (mage, rouge, spearman, etc.) 5. let aura users use there attibutes as well let them be as diverse as magic users ( as for how i leave that to you) 6. good job on the book use of myths are great, character development is great, villenesses are good(4/5), world build can use some help tho. Hope you see this and adapt them if you see it and choose to (1. impliment in future chapter 2. ignore 3. rewrite with the new setup). im down for any .With regards,Unknown*
i feel you on that one but still
how much bigger is it gonna get🤨
Love the novel, im at chapter 385. was asking if you could make a auxilery chapter with all the different ranks of things like (talent, cultivation,etc) and im really asking that you dont trap yourself in a labyrinth of history for the plot and make loopholes that you cant close it has a lot of potential and i wanna read it to the end. My regards. ChaosKing.... (ps. should have just made the the blood elf ancestors daughter austins wife {i mean she was made for that role} but in the future you can impliment it after some romantic moments i guess👌
One of the best novels ive started to read recently. Development is good along with the designs but i'm having problems remembering the way they cultivate and advance so I was wondering if it was posible to create an auxilery chapter with a full break down of the different powers and all the differnt power ups the will need to get until the overlord realm with their genes (keep ip the good work I loved GFWAS)
really need to create an auxilery page that breaks down the power / status scaling pls 👌🏼
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