MagiSimba

Very good, please continue

What...?

Thanks for the chp

thanks for the chapter

Honestly I got discouraged, things are very fast and without "emotion" so to speak, by emotion I mean real difficulties, beings that forced them to almost death or destruction, just like thanos in the movies where you put despair in the avengers and in those times make chapters more long please to give us an ''immersion'' where we feel what they are going through, how much they are suffering to win, to feel their emotions, I find the story interesting and the idea wonderful, so far it's not bad but I do this criticism because I believe it can reach a much higher level than that. And please don't make endings so ''abrupt'' where they are fighting and out of nowhere they won, I think it's missing ''details'' I think your style is making the story go too fast where if it was slower it would be better because you could give more details and give us an ''immersion'''. I make this review because I really like this story, where characters from other universes can interact with each other and fight together, so I would like it to reach its maximum potential so to speak.

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Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

good