Banjo_The_Fox

Banjo_The_Fox

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2021-06-14 Bergabung Global
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Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
2 months ago
Commented

alright, I like this story, I like this plot, I like the characters but the overuse of ! is throwing me off with it.

Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
2 months ago
Commented

It's good but when did he learn to use water? and why do you have such an overuse of exclamation points? !

Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
2 months ago
Commented

I like it but the constant injection of author notes throws off the vibe, can't immerse yourself in a story like that

Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
2 months ago
Posted

MC is not the MC, he's just a viewer, a tool for the reader, he does nothing at all which is a shame because I love this trope and really wanted to like this, the RGR trope is far too rare.

Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
9 months ago
Commented

Permanent blessing scrolls seem OP, wouldn't that basically make the Pope or the very richest living demigods?

Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
9 months ago
Commented

Solo a D rank as a student or be expelled? Like 50 chapters ago it was said most people never achieved higher than D, feels like that's too high an expectation for an academy that's considered one of the worst

Banjo_The_Fox
Banjo_The_Fox
9 months ago
Commented

MC seems way too weak with having this system, only neck and neck after a year of training with such an OP system? They're both still kids, seems like Shye should be much stronger

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