Even though it has few chapters and is very good, I liked the idea; I just don’t see much development. The story is good, and the concept is strong, but in the chapters you posted, it's already the beginning and the end. Kira is practically too OP, which makes future confrontations difficult, unless you add another power system or introduce another person with a Death Note as Kira’s enemy. Having another person with a Death Note as an adversary would be amazing. But the story is really good; keep it up! 10/10.
The story is very good, my only complaint is that the chapters are too short and rushed. I hope that in the future the chapters will be longer and have two points of view per chapter so that we have a better sense of the setting in that world. But the story is excellent, I give it 10/10. Note: Keep writing, it's really good! [img=proud]
Very good story, especially the Jumper's power choice. Not to mention that during Jhaerys' time, which is already a 10/10 for me, very few fics take place in the pre-Dance era. Hopefully, it continues to be good with great development..."
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Muito bom, super recomendo pra quem quiser ler. A minha unica reclamação e que são poucos capitulos escrava mais porfavor quero ler mais ............................
"It was one of the best story ideas I've ever seen. The only thing I have to complain about is that it takes a long time for the other chapters to come out. But keep going; the story is very good."[img=orgulhoso]
That was in the series, in the books the Withe Walkers are like another race. Not to mention that in the books there was a night patrol commander who married one and even had a son. As far as I remember I'm not sure about the son but I remember he married one.
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What I wanted to say was that everything was too magical, it was very OP, but the story is very good if you compare it to some other fics here in the webnovel, it's in the top 10 without a doubt. [img=coins][img=exp]
very good, well-told story got derailed at the end but it was good, I really liked it, I recommend reading it.
I didn't like it, it seems like it was generated by an AI, very short chapters, no character development, I'm almost sure that this is generated by Chat-GPT.[img=Out of it]
I read over 50 chapters and still don't understand anything about the story. I don't even know who the MC is, nor if he has spoken or said anything at all
JJK: The Greatest Fraud In History[Dropped.]
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