tbh I feel like that's a weird way to think about it. yeah the eloquence an AI can give comes off as nice reading at first but the redundancy an AI will do(reusing the same word multiple times in the same paragraph and/or rephrasing a sentence or paragraph immediately) makes the "eloquence" come off more as stupidity and a bad read and terribly off putting. however, a known Novice Writer, making mistakes like that is fine, especially if the Writer has an Editor to help or for Webnovel cases where the readers and/or fans can leave critiques the writer can use to continuously grow and evolve their writing? that might be a turn off at first but it's also a really fun thing to see the growth as you read. i very much enjoy seeing such growth. so don't be too hard on yourself, your writing will have a life that the AI's writing can't properly convey. so just keep up the good work and believe in yourself. your book may end up the next SuperGene lol
O.O Here's hoping this goes well. the other one had a decent plot but was definitely very redundant in some of the writing in the simulation areas(but that's probably bc of the AI mentioned).
oh so this is why my thought of him buying chickens and or a few other livestock to raise and make his dimension closer towards possibly being self-sustaining not work....
As long as Theodore is in the sacred dimension he continues to feel a soothing breeze and one thing is certain he cannot bring other living things into the sacred dimension.
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Fantasy · Oceanna_Lee
Nosphaleen has the cancerous gene template still that allows Sylas to make her more Serpent/beast like so that the beast taming contract can be in effect and he can put her in the Totem space. He's fusing with her and it's causing him to take on some of the cancer gene too, that's why he hasn't fused with her before.
A tumor was growing.
Genetic Ascension
Fantasy · Awespec
I feel like 10 being average for an adult human in most novels' stat assignment system is usually good bc some are below average in aspects.... using 1 as the starting point makes it unable to represent below average. that said base stats of 1 as the average do make it simple for exploding growth.
(a/n: 1 is average value of a normal person)
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Fantasy · JMSnovel
not one day but 6 days. plus it's usually a lot of water weight being cut in the first week or so. 7-ish pounds doesn't sound half bad for nearly a weeks worth of jogging, eating healthier, and healthy sleeping pattern.
[Height: 180CM, Weight: 86.5KG]
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Urban · Selective cutting
also im not criticizing by mentioning it and showing the similarities that were already mentioned by the previous commenter, rather i encourage it bc the RWBY when are cool as hell and if more weapons like these found their way into media i consume that'd be awesome.
His design was a mix between a sword and a gun. It looked quite strange as it was a blade that was split into two prongs with a gap in between where the light rays would be shot. The blade would have to be sharp but also durable and able to withstand high temperatures. In Hazmit they had manufactured certain alloys for different kinds of guns. For his weapon he would be using the rifle mode of firing so he used that alloy in conjunction with some flame elemental tier 2 ores. He also used some ice elemental ores at the tip of the barrel and in the energy building tank in the guard of the blade. He used the ice ores in conjunction with some ice formations to cool down the weapon so there was less danger of it overheating or exploding. He then went to work on the others' weapons. Delilah would get a spear with a spear head on the one end and a sniper barrel on the tail end. Johnny would have a staff that could be split into two that would have pistols in each one. Combined though it would make a shotgun attack that was used for armour penetration and siege tactics.
Cosmological Cultivation
Action · EdgeLordSupreme
you can't see it as well but the blonde has a tail (cuz he's a Sun wukong/Monkey king copy). This is Sun and he wields a Staff that can separate into nunchaku like pistols(or shotguns....honestly he hasn't featured in the recent seasons so i dont remember well.) anyways he's another RWBY character.
His design was a mix between a sword and a gun. It looked quite strange as it was a blade that was split into two prongs with a gap in between where the light rays would be shot. The blade would have to be sharp but also durable and able to withstand high temperatures. In Hazmit they had manufactured certain alloys for different kinds of guns. For his weapon he would be using the rifle mode of firing so he used that alloy in conjunction with some flame elemental tier 2 ores. He also used some ice elemental ores at the tip of the barrel and in the energy building tank in the guard of the blade. He used the ice ores in conjunction with some ice formations to cool down the weapon so there was less danger of it overheating or exploding. He then went to work on the others' weapons. Delilah would get a spear with a spear head on the one end and a sniper barrel on the tail end. Johnny would have a staff that could be split into two that would have pistols in each one. Combined though it would make a shotgun attack that was used for armour penetration and siege tactics.
Cosmological Cultivation
Action · EdgeLordSupreme
Ruby and her Scythe that also functions as a Sniper and burst rifle from RWBY
His design was a mix between a sword and a gun. It looked quite strange as it was a blade that was split into two prongs with a gap in between where the light rays would be shot. The blade would have to be sharp but also durable and able to withstand high temperatures. In Hazmit they had manufactured certain alloys for different kinds of guns. For his weapon he would be using the rifle mode of firing so he used that alloy in conjunction with some flame elemental tier 2 ores. He also used some ice elemental ores at the tip of the barrel and in the energy building tank in the guard of the blade. He used the ice ores in conjunction with some ice formations to cool down the weapon so there was less danger of it overheating or exploding. He then went to work on the others' weapons. Delilah would get a spear with a spear head on the one end and a sniper barrel on the tail end. Johnny would have a staff that could be split into two that would have pistols in each one. Combined though it would make a shotgun attack that was used for armour penetration and siege tactics.
Cosmological Cultivation
Action · EdgeLordSupreme
while i can agree that in real life, and logically still, in fantasy, Fractions are a good and easy way to show below average or lesser than a whole number. But, my thoughts process would be that as a Writer or DM(for DnD) there is so much you have to keep track of that isn't numbers. so when numbers are added in, it makes sense to me to keep it to whole numbers(and usually base increments of 10) for ease of math. addition and subtraction with fractions are fairly easy but once you get into the multiplying and dividing....possibly by percentiles? it's a layer of math i either would not be able to properly do on the spot in my head and this would make mistakes in the math and numbers or i would get sidetracked and focus only on the math to make sure it's right and lose focus on everything else. and yes ik calculators and pen and paper are a thing but have you ever tried writing yourself? i have and I've seen some of my friends do it before and some of them are really good.....until any of us have a hard math problem thrown in and then we get sidetracked and stuck and a couple of us never revisit those stories we started bc we never get our inspiration for that story back.
(a/n: 1 is average value of a normal person)
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Fantasy · JMSnovel