Lencana 3
Moments 4
Lost_Firefly_9075
The pacing as well as the character writing is good that I found myself relating to them. There's a lack of world building but since the story is more character driven, it isn't really that much of a big deal. Though there are some minor grammar issues. they are not really that noticeable. This is a good read nonetheless.
Lost_Firefly_9075
Thank you very much! I would really appreciate it if you can rate the story. :)
Lost_Firefly_9075
Thank you for reading! I would highly appreciate it if you can rate the story :)
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original Playful Lullaby
Lengkap
Fun times don't last, memories fade, but bond can never be severed. Reve was leading a fairly lazy but normal life until one summer vacation. His childhood friend Arya suddenly invited him to go on an adventure by solving mysteries written on an old notebook Arya found. As they try to solve those weird mysteries, Reve started to discover interesting but odd facts about their village. Where did these mysteries even came from and who wrote these on the notebook Arya found?13 Chs 8 Koleksi
Hmm, so far so good. There's this mystery about the motive of the father. Aside from that, there's something more about Kian. He was suddenly introduced so his actual relationship with Xalkren is a bit intriguing as well.
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Fantasy · Xalysian