TheSpixa

Here are my thoughts! The book has an interesting plot and could garner a crowd of readers with just the content. There are some issues regarding the excessive paragraphing. Usually, to cut off a paragraph is used to cut a scene or introduce a sudden action or a different topic. Furthermore, you tend to leave a run-on sentence or start a sentence without a subject. “Walking towards the wooden wardrobe.” Is an example. Unlike other languages, English is usually written as “Subject- verb- object”. However, you frequently leave out the subject. Other than that, your book would be a very marketable idea: You have little spelling or vocabulary issues and your occasional usage of sensory vocabulary improves the flow of the book. Keep writing, author! :)

With little to no grammatical errors, this book is an enjoyable read! For those with an affinity for sci-fi or dystopian books, this is a definite read. With consistent use of imagery and descriptive writing to visualise scenes, the author is no amateur! I do get a bit confused sometimes when I’m reading (in the latest chapter; 3-0D for example) so I keep having to reread certain parts to really understand. The wittiness of the protagonist and quality of content makes it easy to relate to the characters in the story. Kudos, author! :)

Anytime, nev!

Aye, aye, aye author, slow down! Haha I was trying a speed joke. Honestly, never in my life have I seen 12 chapters updated in a week. I had to double back for a second. Even with loads of chapters written each week, the quality of the content is still as consistent! From reading, I get very much flash vibes with the protagonist’s ability. If you like one of those overpowered mc, this book is for you! I have no negative feedback, just suggestions. Maybe try an editing software, many authors here too struggle with grammatical mistakes, so maybe to ensure flawless grammar, try them! Also, the protagonist seemed a bit shallow but that may be the setbacks of every character. With that being said, this could just be my own preference to a protagonist. With an author like this, I don’t think readers would be bored lol. Great job author!

With a consistent updating schedule and production of well-written chapters, I have little feedback to say about this book. I’m not really into transmigration and can be very picky, but this book may make me consider the genre. It’s that good. It’s one of the first books I’ve added to my collection. It’s genre specifically plays well for male readers and the content too is perfect. Understanding that not everyone is monolingual, I can’t comment on the english other than to maybe consider an editing software to spot the grammatical mistakes you’ve missed. It’s nothing major, of course, it’s just to ensure flawless work. I myself too sometimes overlook mistakes so it's a great alternative to a content editor if you have none. Keep up the great work author!

Interesting read! The book is well written with few to no grammatical mistakes; making reading smooth and enjoyable. I have almost no qualms about it. However, as an avid reader of revenge stories, I am missing the true rage from the Protagonist. I feel that if the story were to revolve around her executing revenge along with the male lead- there should be a very solid idea on why she wanted revenge. So far, all I’ve felt from her was fear and regret. Which is not a bad feeling per say, but not justifiable enough for revenge. I don’t feel betrayal, all I felt was that the villager’s actions were extreme. However, since this is only the second chapter, I can’t really say that it’s a deal breaker for the book. If there were a plot twist in later chapters or a sudden burst of anger from the protagonist, I’d say this book would be close to flawless. Just like one of the other reviewers too, chapter one( which I will comment on where I felt was a bit off) had a paragraph that threw me off. If I were to narrow down on what, I would say it is about the elder; why is he so important? Why did he ‘suddenly’ feel evil? And you referred him to as ‘the’ when the readers have yet to know the man. In all, this is a very eye catching story and plays into the idea of those typical rebirth manhwas very well. I had to really read into every sentence to spot mistakes so it just goes to show the effort and time the author put in this book. If it’s a reader’s preferred genre, this would be their perfect pick. Good job and good luck, author! :)

Ah!!! Thank you so much! I really tried to make this book enjoyable for others. Also, me too! I hate slow paced books ^_^

Thank you! I’ll try my best on this book as my others! 🥰

Thank you so much! This really touched me🥰