Probably one of if not the best original stories on webnovel, and yes, I said original. Do not let the mention and breif visitation of games fool you, Abadom has written an amazingly fleshed out world from the ground up. Anything jnvolving games only takes up about 5 - 10% of the story. Abadom isnt perfect, so ill make a pro and con list and explain why for each entry. PROS: MC - Phillip is the best main character ive ever read. He actually evolves like a character should, he doesnt just stay the same stagnant pile of writing. Supporting Characters: A lot of the supporting characters are very well fleshed out, none of them feel like yes men or ' heroine_ 4058'. World Building: There is plenty of world building, and it explores how the world is outside of the human empire a lot. CONS: Now before getting into cons, I personally dont see some of these as cons, but I do know a lot of people do, anything like that I'll put a star next too. Yappology *: Goddamn do the characters in his story never stop yapping. Every character just goes on and on and on, makes me think every character has ADHD or something. Theres a reason each chapter is a minimum of 50 pages (thats a joke keep doing yo shit Abadom). Excessive Mystery*: Although mystery is a good thing to have in any story, there is a metric ton of mystery attatched to this series. Without spoiling anything, we are told of multiple things that we wont know the true meaning of for atleast 100 chapters, and it can get annoying after a while. Inconsistency: Although there are not a lot of inconsistencies in the story, there is in the uploading chapters. Now, I understand why his schedule is incosistent, and I dont really mind, but there are those times where I just cant defend it. a week is fine, 2 weeks is fine, 3 - a month is a bit outrageous. In case of family stuff is different, but other than that, an announcement or so would be nice. though to be fair, im not on the dicord (if there is one) so maybe he announces that stuff there. Anyways, im done yapping myself. TLDR: Very good, read it you shmuck.
As someone said before, Terraria is always a good option, although a bit beyond what he would be capable of even where we were in the story where you stopped. so that would be way later. Skul the Hero Slayer could be interesting, but ultimately useless if he cant swap skulls and gain relics like Skul can. I would love to see Phillip with the Predator skull or the reaper skull though, that'd be fun. Monster Hunters always one you could do. Granblue Fantasy Relink, Baldurs Gate 3 (I cast pouch full of bombs), Hollow Knight could be interesting due to how 'soul' works. You could also do Hades or God Eater 3. And yes, I did just rattle off games in my steam library.
Anyhow, before you go, what Gamerverse do you think would fit for the Mc? Bonus points for small and concise indie games with potential.
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this sentence is a bit weird. you switched from 1st to 3rd person half way through the sentence. "his" should be my if you keep the 1st person view. "I" should be switched to "he" if you want to keep 3rd person. sorry for nitpicking. in writing my W131 essay this week so Im in grammar checking mode.
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My finals are coming soon so I get it. Hope you got some good scores.
Had some exams pop up.
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Terraria class would be like a 8/10 in terms of power when thinking about how far we got in the story. i mean, you can run about 350mph in endgame, can literally fly, and the Moon Lord is literally Cthulu, so that kinda tells you the progression of calamity and some other mods. Also, one of the final weapons can just create black holes, so yippee.
I thought about making major changes to the flow of the story but that isn't necessary. I think its fine to add things here and there to make it all flow more concisely but overall, the pace and future of the story is something I'm happy with, although this time, I'll inject some of the discarded and ignored events I never added, Like Philip's clash with Vincent to give some background on the Heroes' potential and strength.
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Were not Where
"Of course I can. Where the reasons I shared before not enough?"
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"And you, Philip, is.." -> "And you, Philip, are..."
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I dont know how you are doing this within weeks of each other man. i struggle to write 2k words in a single week, let alone a couple of days. Make sure you take a break once that writing euphoria is over, dont wanna get burn out.
Next chapter should be released within the week so thank you for reading!
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THE GOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAT
{You should accept it}
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original An Addicts Guide To Webnovel
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I try to teach beginners or addicts things about webnovel. I might talk about random shit in the future. credit goes to @averageidiot132 on wattpad. I stole the idea form him. Send the guy love. also https://discord.gg/nHgypagwBV is the discord server. yee yee105 Chs 97 Koleksi
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Infinity X Infinity
Perfection. It seems that every human strives for it, but what about when a person actually achieves it? Boredom. The only feeling Kazu Crital felt after doing everything thought impossible. So what is one thing that is know for being inevitable? Death. Kazu Crital tried to break the cycle of life and death... He succeeded in a way. Now reborn as a new person, as the champion of a god. But his master isn't some unknown god. His master is the god of gods, Herrescher of life and death, a being who spans universes with her influence. Infinity isn't the concept of a universe that will never end, but it is instead Concept of birth and renewal, the concept of life and death. Oh? What should you call me? I go by many names. But you can call me Ophis, my pet~. NO HAREM!!! The only character the mc will have a romantic relationship will be ouroboros herself. Also please make sure to correct me on any mistakes, and give me criticism on things I can improve. This book will also be very slow moving. This is also my first time writing an actual book with fleshed out characters. I might feel really robotic at first until I get my writing better. Also I'm on mobile sometimes so yeah. that too. I sometimes write on my computer.27 Chs 335 Koleksi
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Perfection. It seems that every human strives for it, but what about when a person actually achieves it? Boredom. The only feeling Kazu Crital felt after doing everything thought impossible. So what is one thing that is know for being inevitable? Death. Kazu Crital tried to break the cycle of life and death... He succeeded in a way. Now reborn as a new person, as the champion of a god. But his master isn't some unknown god. His master is the god of gods, Herrescher of life and death, a being who spans universes with her influence. Infinity isn't the concept of a universe that will never end, but it is instead Concept of birth and renewal, the concept of life and death. Oh? What should you call me? I go by many names. But you can call me Ophis, my pet~. NO HAREM!!! The only character the mc will have a romantic relationship will be ouroboros herself. Also please make sure to correct me on any mistakes, and give me criticism on things I can improve. This book will also be very slow moving. This is also my first time writing an actual book with fleshed out characters. I might feel really robotic at first until I get my writing better. Also I'm on mobile sometimes so yeah. that too.1 Chs 2 Koleksi
I dont know what Phillip would be able to gain from AC6 though
Anyhow, before you go, what Gamerverse do you think would fit for the Mc? Bonus points for small and concise indie games with potential.
Zero Fate Against the World (New Version)
Video Games · Abadom