Subhajit_Saha_6593

male LV 12
2021-05-14 Bergabung India
Lencana 10

Moments 5
Subhajit_Saha_6593
Subhajit_Saha_6593
6 months ago
Commented

It should be sentence not surface.

"You can go to manager Ma Ning, I will call you If I need you for something." The old man vanished from the room before she could even finish her surface. 

Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!

Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!

Eastern · Odayaka

Subhajit_Saha_6593
Subhajit_Saha_6593
9 months ago
Commented

It should be "loud and intense".

"What's the matter? Did you not sleep well? Perhaps something load and intense kept you up? I don't know what that could be. By the time Alex and I were done with our little exercise, I was so exhausted that I basically just passed out!"

Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist

Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist

Urban · Zentmeister

Subhajit_Saha_6593
Subhajit_Saha_6593
9 months ago
Commented

It should be "supply of *oxygen to the brain"

He wrapped one arm behind her neck, making sure the blade of his wrist was pressed against her spine, where then grabbed his other biceps with said hand. From there, he wrapped his other forearm against the woman's trachea and began to squeeze. Cutting off the supply of brain to her brain, while he pounded her virgin cunt with his large and erect cock.

Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist

Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist

Urban · Zentmeister

Subhajit_Saha_6593
Subhajit_Saha_6593
2 years ago
Commented

??????

Subhajit_Saha_6593
Subhajit_Saha_6593
2 years ago
Commented

Better than mc