This novel is amazing and has good potential, but I'm starting to lose the grip on this story, Author. Things are just too slow.
Masan are the dwarves agents? or the dwarves are Masan slaves?
"Chonky… This is… a slave city of Dwarves!"
I Became The Pope, Now What?
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
Huuuh. This was really a disappointing experience. I was so excited to read this story since it's been ranked 1st for a while now ... But Alas I really regret start reading it. Volume 1 - 4,5/5. It was really good overall in all aspects, nothing to say, simply amazing. Volume 2 - 1/5. It's a disaster and disappointing. I stopped reading after reading chapter 181. The Mc simply became intolerable and pathetic wimp with no dignity. There was good character development in Volume 1. But in volume 2, the Mc basically became a retard. I really don't know if the same author who wrote Volume 1 is the same one who wrote Volume 2. Sometimes I just don't understand the Mc anymore. I tried to push forward and continue to read despite the "new" version of the Mc, but chapter 181 was my breaking point. Anyway, if you want to read a story of a cunning Mc who became a retard wimp as the story goes forward, this is for you.
As a loyal reader and fan of this work, I'm starting to feel concerned about the future of the story. I don't know how to express my opinion ... But I feel like the story begin to lose Its energy...I don't how to explain exactly but I just feel like the last chapters have no feelings conveyed. it's like blank paper with just words and no emotion. The story begins to lose its brilliance lately. Especially from the mc assassination incident and how the shadow of massan popped out of nowhere ... The events are too rushed, you could have definitely taken your time to explain things and convey the events more clearly and with more energy... I have a feeling that you are losing passion for the story which translated to this huge drop in quality in the last chapters. I really hope you could find a solution and revise the latest chapters. I don't mind a hiatus or something if you want to rethink things or take a rest. But just do something please because the story begins to lose its brilliance.
RIP my appetite. *sigh* I was eating when I read this paragraph and the one above ... I literally stopped eating. This is a good lesson. I will never ever again eat while reading this novel. At least not until the war volume end.
It was like someone had filtered the majority of the water out of a sewage pipe and filled a pool with everything that remained.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Agh! I can't wait to know ... When the next chapter will be available?
"The stars are aligned. The time has come. The Core Temple awaits us, Johnathan Colt Westerling."
I Became The Pope, Now What?
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
How did she know? ... 😲 don't tell me she is his previous wife, the one he always spoke about.
"The stars are aligned. The time has come. The Core Temple awaits us, Johnathan Colt Westerling."
I Became The Pope, Now What?
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
is this his original name in the previous world ?
"The stars are aligned. The time has come. The Core Temple awaits us, Johnathan Colt Westerling."
I Became The Pope, Now What?
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
How are the chapters update gonna be this month? 2 chapters per day or just 1?
It's been 20 chapters since Nick started his training.I'm not against reading about the Mc training and improving because that's part of the story. But it's been 20 chapters, Author. And this training is still going on, so things are becoming boring. Especially since aside from the mysterious encounter with Julian, there was no significant event.So I would like to ask when this training gonna end? Is it gonna last for a whole arc? ( like at least 30 chapters?).Thanks for your work.
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach