Leonardo_Martinez_7083

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Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
1 months ago
Commented

black souls reference?

Power of the Deep Sea Knight who guards the secret princess. Allows the user to wield the power of the deep seas and immense might. Controlling the waves and crushing their enemies with the pressure of the deep seas. Can only be activated while using the Deep Sea Knight's Anchor, the true power of the Anchor can only be unleashed with Deep Sea Knight.

My Hero Academia: Restless Gambler

My Hero Academia: Restless Gambler

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
2 months ago
Commented

will lusamine, lillie, serena and salazzle be here too?

Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
3 months ago
Commented

absolute yes, this fanfic is the goat

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Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
11 months ago
Commented

Personally, I would like the story to continue, I liked the development path of the MC and the way the system works, it is different from other fanfics (the few that there are about LOTM), although I would have liked it to be given more development time to the life of the mc and his family, in addition to possible love interests and friendships, show how he slowly uses method acting during his life instead of super summarizing it by better showing his progress, but those are my opinions, no stress, you can continue the story in the future or rewrite it completely in the future if what you have done does not convince you, go calmly at your own pace and do not get overwhelmed

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Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
1 years ago
Commented

great job, I'm liking it a lot, although I would like it to have more interaction with his family and other characters, and show the development and use of his abilities as a beyonder while giving a brief summary of the paths and their sequences, and of course how does this fit in with your plans, and last but not least is the story update, I'm serious, I'm really liking it, thank you very much

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Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
1 years ago
Commented

the MC could have something like a curse like rika de yuta to a lesser extent with the help of his innate cursed technique and little by little he is improving, also on the part of his race a curse hybrid, the "evolution" of tengen, a cursed uterus, or a Yokai from dxd, you know, because of the relationship between cursed energy and senjutsu, those would be my ideas to contribute for the moment

Leonardo_Martinez_7083
Leonardo_Martinez_7083
1 years ago
Posted

that si a good fanfic, good historia, good powers and system, good everything

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