Salty_Crusader

This is the work of author Rictus on SpaceBattles. Its original name is: Path of Ruin. The author left a note stating that he is aware of the situation: "I am aware that my stories Path of Ruin and Danse Macabre have been plagiarized on Webnovel.com. I do not solicit donations to write my stories, so if you see someone doing so claiming to be the author of the story on a site other than Spacebattles or Sufficient Velocity, it is not me. Thank you to all of my readers who have reached out to me about it."

With the SI Daemon turns into a spineless fag. A submissive and pathetic Mc that has no real goals. If you like to read about MCs that are masochistic and thinks that by avoiding to fight is him winning then go ahead, but otherwise this was a big waste of my time.

This is a translation, but it is credited to the original author, which is fair. The grammar and writing quality is gradually improving through the chapters. The updates could be better, but I can not fault the uploader, because the chapters are very long. Overall it is pretty great fanfic.

This work might not be the original and the same fanfic seems to be already uploaded here with 30 chapters. However this is far better than the other one. The writing quality is top notch, practically no grammatical mistakes. Format is much better to read. The uploader also gives us pictures of the things he is talking about, like ships and characters, so that is pretty helpful. In overall this is a great work and I hope it won't get dropped.

Honestly, the pacing is very fast. It is refreshing to see the dance from the greens perspective and I think that this is a great idea. I also love that the mc is not the typical good guy. However the writing quality, the grammar is just so fucking horrible that it makes it hard to fully immerse and enjoy this fanfic.

found it, thanks bro

So far it's pretty good. I haven't seen anything like this fanfic so it's pretty unique. Good grammar and mc doesn't seem incompetent.