Treyton_Johnson

An amazing story, love how it's written and where it's going, I hope the author doesn't drop it. I've loved every chapter so far, only reason it's not a 5 is cause of the update Constantine

While it is an interesting idea, the English is like a preschooler's writing and you can't tell who's talking because the author doesn't have any "povs". They also keep using "man" to describe a child when they should use "boy" because the word "Man" refers to a grown male who is mature. love the concept though.

You haven't fixed the beginning chapters 😔