So far I think you’ve done well in trying to convey that
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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE
Huhu~ I see your point 😌✨
I dont think so, she’s a character from an anime called High School DxD, she’s called Rias. I think the author just chose her because she’s very well known for her red hair
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While i do admit that the ending seemed kind of rushed, i dont necessarily think that it was bad though. Anyway, Vol. 2 seems to have more of a plot and i’m enjoying reading it
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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE
I suggest that if you really want to write it, then perhaps read other authors’ work as a reference or guide. It’s never going to be perfect on your first try, but you’ll get there.
(A/N: I am so bad at English that I can't even make good small fan service, dang it!)
A hollow's story(An isekai story)
Fantasy · SORAhasGONE
You’ll get there 😂👍
(A/N: I am so bad at English that I can't even make good small fan service, dang it!)
A hollow's story(An isekai story)
Fantasy · SORAhasGONE
Is the yuri coming soon? 😭 not to rush you tho, just curious
Of course! I really like this story
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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE
You’re welcome 😊
A hollow's story(An isekai story)
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