LazinessGod

LazinessGod

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2021-03-05 Bergabung Brazil
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LazinessGod
LazinessGod
5 days ago
Commented

Bro, this is a good story, so for all that is holy, don't use AI to perform scenarios... it looks ugly, and almost completely eliminates the desire to continue.

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
22 days ago
Commented

I thought the idea of the communal house was interesting, as you could do something that would connect you more to Tony when he regained his powers; like receiving divine mastery of crafts.

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Commented

It would be interesting if the author wrote a summary of the chapters released in the next chapter. Since I don't remember anything about what happened before the short break

Buku ini telah dihapus.
LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Commented

The Emperor influences, the Emperor protects

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Replied to Rex_Xenovius1998

It would be possible to do something like becoming a pseudo-primarch from Warhammer; with two hearts, 3 lungs, bones covered in ceracelles, superior muscles, superior stomach, kidneys, superior senses...So many possibilities..

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Replied to Aceron

That's not the issue, my friend; HxH is a work with a journey pattern that makes you overlook things that happen in the future or in the past. You don't give much credit to the dark fact because the story started by making you focus on the MC as someone good and without problems at that moment. Just like it was done in Tokyo Ghoul, Naruto and other works; where even though it was made clear that people's lives are not good, they never started the works with the protagonist suffering any abuse, and if they did suffer something in the first chapter, it never lasts long. My problem, as I said, is that I'm not going to start a story where the first chapter only shows the character being abused, giving a hook for more later chapters of him being abused, with the title of the following chapters showing that he only reincarnates in chapter 5 or 6; which indicates that the reader will have to read possibly 4 chapters of a child/teenager being abused and being mentally broken; his journey of a shitty life. As I said, I'm not sadistic enough to see the signs and carry on.

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Commented

Dude, it should already be September with the amount of things that happened...

El 10 de agosto fue el cumpleaños de Peter y un grupo se reunió en la casa Parker. 

MCU AU - Una nueva aventura - Peter SI

MCU AU - Una nueva aventura - Peter SI

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LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Commented

The guy is on speed run.. It doesn't make sense for his games to be so successful in such a short time..

Los días pasaron y llegaron los primeros días de agosto. 

MCU AU - Una nueva aventura - Peter SI

MCU AU - Una nueva aventura - Peter SI

Movies · GOATXXI

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Commented

If it doesn't make noise, how are you using echolocation?

Incluso si estuviera despierto, Peter aún está invisible y no está emitiendo ningún olor o ruido que lo delate

MCU AU - Una nueva aventura - Peter SI

MCU AU - Una nueva aventura - Peter SI

Movies · GOATXXI

LazinessGod
LazinessGod
1 months ago
Posted

I haven't read it, but this story is proof that we live in a simulation, since I've been preparing a fic (which I would probably never post) with this exact profile for at least 3 weeks.