DaoistUSU8gl

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DaoistUSU8gl
DaoistUSU8gl
3 years ago
Posted

the book is really dark with a lot of plot twist. the writing improves after 15. this author has a unique persepective of what readers who crave action want.

DaoistUSU8gl
DaoistUSU8gl
3 years ago
Commented

is this information necessary? this is a locked chapter! stop doing this you are basicly killing your own book. when writing lilith awesome a different persona. you sound so bland that i cant even picture snake voice or persona

Lilith didn't know what was going on, but before asking him, she decided to watch with curiosity. Strangely for her, Noah started taking off the sweatshirt he was wearing. That sweatshirt was dirty because he hadn't showered yet, being from the same outfit he had worn in the Fortress: the outfit he used to sit on the dirt, the clothes he was forced to roll on the grass to dodge the attacks of the monsters. So he was not sitting on the sofa, but on the floor of his office, not even sitting on the carpet, knowing that the carpet would get dirty and he was the one who would have to wash the rug later.

Lucifer's Descendant System

Lucifer's Descendant System

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DaoistUSU8gl
DaoistUSU8gl
3 years ago
Replied to Dead_shadow

i saw this comment every where

DaoistUSU8gl
DaoistUSU8gl
3 years ago
Posted

the charater development is awesome. the writing gets better after chapter 9. the MC isnt upur tpically stupid mc and he doesnt want to save the world. which is so refreshing!

DaoistUSU8gl
DaoistUSU8gl
3 years ago
Commented

i cant wait for more. how will mana cores fit into the story.

DaoistUSU8gl
DaoistUSU8gl
3 years ago
Replied to shree_charan_0124

is this your frist time reading books like this? i enjoyed the book the way it is. if you like generic novels there is alot on web novel. author-san keep up the good work!😁😁😁😁🥰