okay are you like a publication company or something?
come on guys start writing some reviews and give me feed back on what you think and how this story should get better! it's an all original work never before written so take part in it's creation and you can be given due credit when it scores big and becomes a best seller!!!
very interesting and inspiring book can't wait for more!!?👍
this story plot is fast paced detailed and growing I'm satisfied with where it's going but because there is no realism to it and it's purely fantasy I feel like I'm running out of ideas so ideas and or opinions thoughts ect is most welcome.
it could use some more development and as I proceed forward the plot thickens in my mind as to where this story might be headed. right now I'm at a stand still for this story ideas and support are welcome.
overall the story has a nice start hopefully it will get better and have more design and detail to it than it currently does right now. as for the plot I think it's highly interesting and very aspiring it's not like your typical american novels and has a slight hint or realism to it.
this book by far just keeps getting more interesting my opinion though as an author the build up in suspense of both the chapter and the release of chapters could be applied to increase in the interest of the book. all good things are best savored so if the author waits longer before releasing a chapter and tries a bit of cliff hanging with the chapters more than he has already I believe his reviews will sky rocket on this book with how good it already is.
this book keeps getting better and better and is very inspirational in regards to detail orientation and helping one find a better way to be detailed.
interesting story I think I'd like to read the entire thing before forming an opinion
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original How to tell a monster from a man
in this world there are things we cant explain and then there are things we can. this story is my story where I share those things I couldn't explain let alone others. those things that we all want to believe are less real than they are. I Ambrose will take you through my life where I journey the road between monster and man everyday of my life. where fights of the powerful can even be struggles to survive. a world where few can even imagine let alone see what is among them and the monsters hide within the men and women around us.16 Chs 5 Koleksi
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Monsters Within
I made it a point to do better with my life than my ancestors parents or even friends had. at some point though trying to be good never works you always give into the beast, especially when your born a monster. what I'm going to tell you is a true story one that has its complications but doesn't change the fact of it's truth. consider it an autobiography precedence to my death if it does come and attest to truth of fact and dispersement of myth and fiction to what you already know. maybe if you have a broadened mindset you might just might be able to see humans aren't the only ones alone in this world.6 Chs 1 Koleksi
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Chronicles of Arius
Arius Malchai Greyson is a man surrounded by mystery scandal and a slowly rising fame. As an assassin of species he is feared by many his beginnings were far more humble for some do not fear him. many whisper his name in awe and fear some in respect. As he grows both into a hero and the richest murderer alive many wonder at his beginnings and where he came from and whether this man truly is invincible or will a mate or two be his undoing?8 Chs 1 Koleksi
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Grimm Reaper
Greyson is a young man trying to live life or at least he thought he was a man. as he discovers there is more to him than even he knows he realizes he doesn't even know what he is. to top life off like a cherry on nasty ice cream the revelation of this knowledge comes as betrayal of hatred from someone close to him and shoves him into the world to begin his journey in life where he must learn to control what he is or lose his life to it. He distances himself in an effort to gain access to a deeper part of himself only to realize regardless of what he may or may not be, like everything else in life, destiny pulls where it wants you at. his course was violently ordained but little did he know it was going to get worse and he wouldn't see it coming.....7 Chs 3 Koleksi
can you show proof of that and prove that your not some shady individual trying to steal the work of others for your own gain?
Monsters Within
Horror · Matt_Greyson_Wolfe