maybe he could have sold the bodies for something..
I get that but there should at least be a communication device. that way he could have directed Wei where to go.
that makes sense but there's gotta be a way to "mail" things back n forth.
there is a monumental difference of his and her pronouns, terrible translation.
he should have justt asked her to transport the primal egg to him.
her shirt not his.. changes the readers view greatly
I would have weaved their boat into a memory so it was always available, especially with the crown of dusk making it more powerful, and it could potentially be upgraded...
yup I'm done. ooooo new stuff ooooo dumb.
I'm giving it 1 more ch, then I think I'm done. This is dumb. and getting worse. no improvement to powers or stats stupid.
done. as I stated it's not piss not pee etc. I won't support this book anymore. fuckin trash.
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Fantasy · ZombieMann