I was so confused for a minute xD
Chapter 154.3 : Cracker Defeated!!
One Piece : Winged Dragons of the Beast Pirates
Anime & Comics · PirateKing24
oh, really? but even the dialogue is different? if thats what it was supposed to be, I missed it lol completely went over my head.
"I knew it! The rumors of a trainer with a Pikachu wandering through town had to be you!" Casey exclaimed, pointing dramatically at Ash before shifting her focus.
Pokemon : Rewind
Anime & Comics · Denzil_Beast
didnt you end the last chapter with her seeing him and hugging Pikachu? why is she acting like that didn't happen? you rewrote the interaction too.
"I knew it! The rumors of a trainer with a Pikachu wandering through town had to be you!" Casey exclaimed, pointing dramatically at Ash before shifting her focus.
Pokemon : Rewind
Anime & Comics · Denzil_Beast
so now you try and accuse him of being a rapist? can we just kill her and be done with it already?
"What are you going to tell him," she interjects before pointedly noting, "and how's he okay with all of this? Does he approve of raping-"
Naruto: The Prince of Lust
Anime & Comics · William777
yes, let the child who was revived in an adult body be the leader instead of literally anyone else....
"Are the cannons ready? Keep firing, Kuina, you're in charge of them. I'll head over there to attack the center of Buggy's camp with Yamato." Luffy said as wings sprouted from his back, and his hair grew.
One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
totally forgot about that.
These two kids are Kaido's daughters and disciples, future leaders of the Beasts Pirates. As long as the country needs the protection of the Beast Pirates, there must be no conflict with them.
One Piece : Winged Dragons of the Beast Pirates
Anime & Comics · PirateKing24
the dialogue and constant talking to himself is absolutely destroying what little entertainment value this ff still had... learn how to use exposition paragraphs rather than just make your mc a jabbering monkey who can't keep his thoughts to himself.
"Did you know that Roger had three people with this Haki?" Luffy thought to himself. "And as for Rocks, they had five, from what I know - Xerec, Newgate, Shiki, Kaido, and Bigmon. But look at my crew – we have five members with Haoshoku Haki and an ancient weapon at the beginning of our journey!" Luffy couldn't help but laugh internally at the immense potential.
One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
'game freak' indeed
"Look, Koby, if Alvida's dream is to be the most beautiful woman in East Blue, it will come true if she has unwavering faith in it! You might be surprised when you see her next time." Luffy spoke seriously.
One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
luffy wouldn't know what verbose means.
"Stop being so verbose! That's none of your business!" Clenching his fists, Luffy gritted his teeth, full of determination. He pressed down on his straw hat, his eyes became extremely sharp, and he shouted to Ren above, "Nami is my companion. No matter what happens, I will never hand her over to you!"
I Quit The Straw Hats And Became Yamato's Fiancee
Anime & Comics · MrTranslator
youre losing consistency in this interaction. misty and Brock were with ash when they first saw her there. she knows Casey met with ash, she shouldn't be surprised. I think you need to reread your last 3 chapters and edit.
"Casey?!" Misty exclaimed in surprise when she saw the energetic girl following Ash. Even Brock raised an eyebrow at the unexpected reunion.
Pokemon : Rewind
Anime & Comics · Denzil_Beast