tftc!
tftc! well... describing things does require practice. especially when trying to not make it sound awkward.
thanos for the chappie! enjoy peakcony.
oh dear... tftc!
zam. I'm wanting more of this timeline now. surely omakes? tftc!
thanks for the chapter! since you asked for feedback, i'll just nitpick a small part. The plot should flow well, and relationships between characters should remain consistent. In particular when Lyria thought about her memories with Rei. Did they just not recently meet? You could go about it something along the lines of "Although having only met for a short time". Other than that, relationships moving pretty fast with no real reason(?) at least in my view. once again, thanks for the chapter and keep going!
tftc. GIVE PRAISE FOR HE HAS NO EQUAL
ill pray for you.
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