I read . I was agreeing with you that the story is very good .
The problem is not the story . THIS IS EXACTLY HOW Batman behaves in most comics in all continuities !
Ignore the haters ! This story is fantastic ! And YES this has happened A LOT OF TIMES and every time it happens some ally/friend/relative of Batman or Batman himself is basically like " Yes I know I/he made a mistake ! Can't we just accept this and move on ? " . Or , even worse , they declare that people harmed by the actions of Batman or any other superhero are being petty and childish for wanting to punish them . This is very , very , very , very ridiculous , so ridiculous that it would have to improve a lot to be complete nonsense !
Seriously, I really liked the fic, the main anti-hero character and the deconstruction of Morality Based on the Protagonist (Seriously, how many times will Industries like DC and Marvel make the "Heroes" of history cause many deaths, massive destruction and then practically say "I did it and I regret it... Let's "move on" and we'll never speak of this again!" Are you going to keep buying this crap?
Should not ! Your story is sensational !
This is STILL a history of the Slice of Life genre . Using Gacha to make Edward innately the world's greatest unstoppable badass would possibly spoil that , at least for now , as he is still a teenager , even with the life experience of an adult .
Congrats on tackling this. That was one of the things that disgusted me the most about superhero comics! They are constantly claiming that doing things the most pragmatic and logical way is ALWAYS the "wrong thing" to do, then they mumble some explanation and... That's it!
Playing with the fantasies of a cute baby-looking hottie ? So far so good , especially for this fic , but really : In the eyes of others, is he going to have romantic/sexual relationships with a child and everyone is just going to ignore it ? This will end the ( little ) realism of this story !
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Anti-NTR Man: I Save The Main Character From Getting CUCKED!
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