Okay world building and story development, but the characters are extremely shallow, and the writing... typos, missing punctuation, just... bad writing. Even the 'edited' chapters are pretty bad. Overall, if you are fine with shallow characters and lesser than MTL-level writing, then sure, enjoy.
Good writing quality, but would like to see more emotional side to characters, but I suppose this is meant to be an dive into the magic system (even though it’s not thoroughly explained in the novel, only be Rudy, an unreliable narrator) I am wondering what will happen with the knowledge portion, especially with the teleportation incident, as that often destroys focus like these. After all, do they remove such an important plot point? Or do you have the MC not do anything, which is extremely idiotic in most cases. Only 10 chapters and just met Roxy, so nothing really to say about story development.
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Lock at 4, after that the girls would just feel like accessories. Even now it's hard to give enough character insights while progressing the plot
But, it will be concentrated in R-18 scenes, which I plan to completely separate from main story going forward, so you can just skip those when there's 2+ girls if you want.
Definitely with Ariel, since she’s that way in the source material. If that’s not for you, then don’t read, thanks :)
Read to chapter 11
Read to chapter 3
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Chapter 69 - We Have Been Reunited: Finale
Leon Greyrat: The Second Son - Mushoku Tensei OC
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original Leon Greyrat: The Second Son - Mushoku Tensei OC
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One day in the six-faced world, a newborn child, completely conscious of his surroundings, is taken in by a certain party of adventurers… the Fangs of the Black Wolf. But not two years later, the party splits, and our main character, Leon, is greeted with the pleasant surprise of a younger brother, in the form of Rudeus Greyrat. As Leon discovers more of the world and increases his strength to stave off any danger he could encounter, he comes to realize that in this world, and in his life, there is one thing he holds dear above all… family. Arcs are released in batches. Relationships (Spoilers): OC x Sylphiette, Roxy, Eris, ? Rudeus x Sara, ?, ?108 Chs 3.7k Koleksi
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The Sage's Partner - Re:Zero OC (DROPPED)
Natsuki Subaru fights an unknown, lonely battle against fate itself, all alone. But... what if he didn't? What if the star-loving sage candidate had support? What if he had... a partner? Subaru x Emilia OC x Rem (Eventual) OC x Crusch11 Chs 169 Koleksi
Arc 6 is now out. On the future, I have just begun an internship that takes off 12 hours from my day thanks to taking the bus (I know... I want to die), because of this, as well as me dabbling in an original story, the next arc will likely take quite a while compared to the other two. But then again, if inspiration strikes, I find it quite easy to write a lot, so I won't promise anything. Thanks for reading :)
Leon Greyrat: The Second Son - Mushoku Tensei OC
Anime & Comics · OmegaLul1234