Crosswork_76

I know this isn't your book because you mentioned it but I just hate how this always happen with this type of story that they invented guns before the concept of even gunpowder was invented in eruope witch I can see you can get away with because magic but they were going for a somewhat historical background it just completely defeats the point of the combat during that period. I am going to actually here but gun powder wasn't introduced to erupe until the the 13th century so your telling me this man introduced gunpowder like 1,000 years before it actually was introduced to eruope and also plate mail didn't exist and the only thing close to it was china invented gunpowder during the time this book is set in and I know it's a fanfiction it just always seems to happen all the time I would just would like some originality at this point because it is done so often anyways sorry I had to get that off my chest and once again because I feel like someone will mention this yes i know it is just a fanfiction. sorry again

Hey umm i don't want to seem nagging but um is the story dead you haven't update in a while so i was just checking