ZeDarkness

2 years ago

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Dude, the twists and turns seem to be getting in a good spot. Please stop leaving it on a cliffhanger, it's been a month or two already. Finish the end and then publish it off to a company, I can say this story can pretty much get there if you make it proper. [img=recommend]

ch 56 Logbook #049 - The Endtimes Hoch

War of the Two Kinds

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ZeDarkness

3 years ago

Commented

Every cat's way ofsaying hello, lol

"Don't worry, she has her tricks of solving that," Nia answered as she rubs her face onto him, placing her territorial scent onto him and giving her an early morning greeting.

The Time-Traveller and His Motley Crew of Monster Girls

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ZeDarkness

3 years ago

Commented

So some sides of the world of MMTG has alliances and businesses with Monster girls but the towns and villages are still racist ?

Sighing, I look and made a normal natural smile. "Listen, kid, if you want to make good money, join the Adventuring Academy and if you prefer learning Magical Arts, go to the Monster Girl Magic Center at the north of here. Though, only available for monster girls, humans can have exceptions."

The Time-Traveller and His Motley Crew of Monster Girls

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ZeDarkness

3 years ago

Commented

Rich...in gold. But still dont want to enter the academy, how sad for the kid.

"Here, take it!" I grunted to the lanky figure as I hand over a small bag of gold coins. "And never join the bandits' kid, they are bad people."

The Time-Traveller and His Motley Crew of Monster Girls

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ZeDarkness

3 years ago

Commented

isn't that a idiom of wanting to go to the toilet? 😅

Chapter #002 - Calling of the Wild

The Time-Traveller and His Motley Crew of Monster Girls

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ZeDarkness

3 years ago

Commented

Either this is a reference to that book that became a movie or an add on the secret of your other book's inspiration.

Passing by a table which was meant as both a dining table and a living room rest table, laid a petite lass who was watching television and reading a novel at the same time. An old favourite of mine, a book named The War of the Worlds By H.G Wells.