Overall as a new story I’ve come across, it’s very solid. Just wish there were more chapters released. Everything you’ve done for the story is pretty solid hopefully you’ll stick with it😎✊ Best of luck!
If you decide to add romance early then as a suggestion wait until MC has entered the academy. Otherwise with the story progression as of now the way you’re building your story it’s pretty solid so far.
So far reading to chapter 19 you’ve set a good pace for the development of the story. As far as the world goes from the transition between it’s pretty good, so far it’s focused on the palace which is where he would get all his powers before going to explore the world he’s in I assume. [To explain the world he’s in maybe have it explained by the people he’s going to go against in the palace]~Just a suggestion. Overall as a system story you’w made it in a unique and interesting way! Keep up the good work!!!🫡✊
So far its great how the RSSG world is used in your story. I’m looking forward to seeing how this story develops as there is a huge potential! Please don’t drop it!!!!!
Honestly between Summoner, Vampir, and this one they have a few similarities but the three have their own unique flow as in character development, world interaction, and a pretty good plot progression. So all the way to this point in my opinion stay with the flow because it’s been a great read!!!! And congrats for the contract✊
So far reading all the books you’ve released have been really good and hopefully this one will also be updated like the others!!! Keep up the great work!!!
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Fantastic story so far. Is the story dropped or on break??????????
This is one of the best types of storytelling I’ve read in awhile! I hope you don’t drop it! Do you plan on continuing this fantastic book????
Honestly I think so far it’s been solid. Normally the mc does the picking but here it’s Tang Yin and it adds an interesting twist!
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Overall the story is pretty solid. Looking forward to see how the world will expand and how the characters develop. Keep up the good work!
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