DepressedBatman

male LV 14
2021-01-13 Bergabung Canada
Lencana 8

Moments 4
DepressedBatman
DepressedBatman
2 years ago
Posted

I really enjoy the overall concept of the story and the characters. The only problem is that the author as a big problem with the pronouns of the characters. Pronous change between paragraphs and sometimes sentences. Makes it hard to read.

DepressedBatman
DepressedBatman
DepressedBatman
3 years ago
Commented

Nice

DepressedBatman
DepressedBatman
3 years ago
Commented

Yes