Daniel_Alves_8678

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2021-01-08 Bergabung Global
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Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
19 days ago
Commented

The author is getting more insane every day, right now he thinks he has a heart lol

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
1 months ago
Replied to Siqui

I believe the author mentioned this once. It would be because he created such a big and vast world for the sheer enjoyment of it that he kind of got lost.

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
1 months ago
Commented

This story has been really boring lately

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
1 months ago
Commented

Author, I find it a bit strange that he can create a drug that quickly makes someone immortal, but he can't fix his serum in more than 3 years. he should have made at least good progress on that.

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
2 months ago
Posted

The story is interesting, but as time goes by it becomes full of inconsistencies, repeated chapters, sometimes it seems like a part of the story was skipped. The protagonist also practices some questionable behaviors considering his personality. Finally, the backstory seems to be very thrown in, sometimes appearing without any context.

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
2 months ago
Commented

This novel is full of disconnected chapters

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
9 months ago
Commented

thx for the chap

And the other, an expressionless maid tucking away a smoking sniper rifle under her skirt….

Fallen Chronicles

Fallen Chronicles

Fantasy · Hail_The_loli

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
10 months ago
Commented

so Sad that he drop this :(

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
1 years ago
Commented

Author, I have found so far a fantastic idea. There was only one point that bothered me a little: the fact that there was no test for the healing factor and that the mutation occurred in a few months. If possible, so that your story is more reliable, I advise you to change it. Ex: after 2 years of tests, without discovering anything wrong, it was distributed to the population, but the mutation started to occur after 3 years of global distribution. Or something like that, I'm not a writer, but a well-researched and truthful story always tastes different. Well, even if you don't change I thought your story idea was very good, even more so because I didn't see any signs of a system, which only makes it seem like a lazy story. Anyway, I hope this is as great a book as it appears to be.[img=recommend]

Daniel_Alves_8678
Daniel_Alves_8678
1 years ago
Replied to daiost_Pure_void

unfortunately this happens to everyone, at least I hope so. It's the weight of maturity and responsibilities.