Dao_of_Idontknow

Dao_of_Idontknow

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Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
6 months ago
Posted

The reviews are fake they are only commmenting on this book. Don’t meet the mc until chapter 11 when you have to pay. If I could give this zero stars I would.

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
1 years ago
Commented

When he was in clear sky world wasn’t he unable to cultivate and didn’t leave his house.

Even though Alex had seen many life and death situations in his previous life on Clear Sky World. However, at this moment, he still couldn't suppress the overwhelming emotion in his heart.

System: Replicating The Heavens

System: Replicating The Heavens

Fantasy · Carefree_Dream

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Commented

This is stupid the MC doesn't know if the demon is stronger than him but want to attack the demon. Plot armor: MC kills the demons.

Since the demons wanted to take their lives, then he would return the favour!

A Chaotic World

A Chaotic World

Eastern · Sweating_Cloud

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Replied to BigSausageDad

Pause.

"Don't forget what she just said," Yu Sheng said with authority, "She was throwing those words right in your face. Why can't you understand your friendship with her is O-V-E-R. She made her choice." Yu Sheng knew Ye Futian better than anyone else. He looked cynical, but deep inside he was warm and understanding, especially towards people he knew well. He knew that Ye Futian was trying to forgive Feng Qingxue and give her another chance.

The Legend of Futian

The Legend of Futian

Eastern · Jing Wuhen

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Replied to Aravind_S

Thanks for the comment I just saw it.

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Posted

I don’t write review really so don’t expect much. The story is fine but think that I don’t like in the novel is that the author keeps use “ he was cruel” or a variation of this in a middle of a sentence for no reason. In addition the novel they keep saying “what transpired” no one talks like this they could just say what happen. Other than this I don’t understand why the mc’s mentor/teacher hasn’t moved him to where he is I don’t think it’s stated in the but if it was can you tell me. Other than this thing everything is going fine in the novel. Smaller Review Writing Quality: The writing quality is fine except some time the author rewrites a sentence or grammar errors. Update stability: Can’t really say anything since I’v e been reading for two weeks but normally 7 chapters a week. Story development: The development is above average; we go to different places but nothing new or different. Don’t get that many new characters in the story would be okay if they had development. Character design: Not many descriptions of characters. World Background: The world background is average the Mc goes to different places but doesn’t go their again after that, would be fine because where going to a academy but where 200 chapters in and only been to like five other places other than his house. Does have room for development because we’re in a low grade city.

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

Dao_of_Idontknow
Dao_of_Idontknow
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter.