ping_101

1yr

Commented

I feel like neph is rey palatine and sunny is old luke skywalker. No matter what they do, neph is always the one leading the other especially sunny. Whenever sunny speaks to neph, his IQ seem to drop a bit judging from the questions that he brought up with neph. I mean he should be able to figure out why neph made the choices that she did without asking her directly. It's like the author is lowering sunny's IQ on purpose so that the story could progress the way the author wants it. Anyway, I hope guilty three will stop using this method to move the plot to the story cause I think it's turning cliché .

ch 808 A Long-Awaited Conversation

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

ping_101

1yr

Replied to Guiltythree

Please don't aim for 3000 chapters. I am not questioning your imagination and creativity. Please bear with me, I have read quite a few novels be it fantasy, eastern fantasy or the like. But I have yet stumble upon a good story with over 2000+ chapters cause most of its chapters are story fillers that makes no sense or take you out of the story. I mean does the entire story really have to be told around 3000 chapters. No offence but the plot is bound to get repetitive. And most importantly of all is that my wallet will bleed from reading 3000 chapters. Lol.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

ping_101

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Nightmare Begins

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

ping_101

1yr

Posted

Definitely better than the current no. 1 on the charts when this review was posted. It will absolutely become a classic granted the writer manage to maintain his or her consistency in story and character development. Try reading the first 49 chapters cause hey it's free.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

ping_101

2yr

Posted

Despite the glaring mistakes that you occasionally stumble upon while reading, I still wholeheartedly recommend this book to everyone even if you are not a horror fan like myself. Do yourself a favour and immerse in a world full of unusual characters and who knows you might even receive a few surprises along the way.

My House of Horrors

Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner

ping_101

2yr

Replied to XIETIAN

Could you do me a kindness, could you please stop trying so hard to beautify the female leads body or movements. You already made your point how stunning and attractive they are when they made their first appearance so please stop reminding us of their beauty ,we get it already. While you are at it, please look up the dictionary for words that describe facial expressions. You are a writer for goodness sake, there are numerous facial expressions that a human could show besides having a "glint in their eyes" or "not knowing whether to laugh or cry". If you wish to be a better author then I truely hope that you try to improve on your story writing. Sincerely, a big fan of fantasy genre novel.