The_Alfa

The_Alfa

male LV 3

just a normal human

2020-12-24 Bergabung Indonesia
Lencana 7

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The_Alfa
The_Alfa
1 years ago
Posted

i didn't expect this novel will be good. i mean look at their premise, it's really cliche. but i wrong. while the premise is indeed cliche and seems bad, the story development is really good and the writing style is good too, not at lotm level but it's still good. about the main character, zio. i personally really like him. he feels like a real person, he doubt, struggle, he cheers, confused. and world building. i can't really judge it because when i write about this review it's only have 105 chapters, but so far so good. not otherworldly amazing but good enough. then how about the story itself? well it's really good, while it is indeed will be cliche sometimes, but because the good writing it didn't feel bland. When i write this, the story still yet enter the main story (Zio said it in one chapter, and i can feel it too because nothing big is really happen). but the story building is goddamn good. you can feel this will be good(if the author didn't fucked up). i think this novel have potential to exceed the author's pov. goodluck with your novel author, i hope your success.

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
1 years ago
Replied to juamponcenrile

with his behaviour? red priest

He watched the silver specks of light disappear in the night sky, sighed softly, and muttered to himself, "I wonder when I'll be able to possess such extraordinary powers…"

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
1 years ago
Commented

yeah that's definitely red priest pathway behaviour

"My dear bunnies, my darling chicks, my lovely ducks, or perhaps my adorable lambs? Which one tickles your fancy?"

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
1 years ago
Commented

that is something what red priest beyonder pathway would say

"Ah, it is good to meet you, my cabbages," he exclaimed with fervor.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
1 years ago
Commented

ah yes water is wet

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
2 years ago
Commented

lotm reference?

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
2 years ago
Commented

visionary

'Though, I have to train and get used to this.' Compass Carburettor nodded, sighing in realisation, 'So, this is how a System senses everything. I can feel the waves of emotions that are directed towards me. So, no matter where a person is in this world, as long as they think about me, I'll be able to sense the relevant Mental Energy from them.'

I Hate Systems

I Hate Systems

Fantasy · Overlord_Venus

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
2 years ago
Commented

it can't be right?

The other end of the room was a study, adorned with books on the shelves that were arranged akin to a library. And placed beside it were a couple of chairs overlooking a table. Currently, the Queen was seated on the chair, wearing a monocle to help her read through a massive book with tiny letters filling up the pages.

I Hate Systems

I Hate Systems

Fantasy · Overlord_Venus

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
2 years ago
Replied to XxTruck_KunxX

it's from chinese novel btw.

Peter stood beside a crying May as Ben was buried in the Cemetary. Peter was dressed in a sharp tuxedo. He had gotten a haircut and looked more handsome than ever in that fitting clothes.

I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)

I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)

Anime & Comics · ashes_

The_Alfa
The_Alfa
2 years ago
Commented

i have the home ground