Lucas_Freitag

Lucas_Freitag

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2020-11-25 Bergabung Global
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Lucas_Freitag
12 days ago
Commented

thx for the chapter:D and she realy is a 9 to 5 slave

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Lucas_Freitag
11 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chaper:D

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Lucas_Freitag
11 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter:D

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Lucas_Freitag
1 years ago
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thanks for the chapter:D

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Lucas_Freitag
1 years ago
Commented

thaks for the chapter:D

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Lucas_Freitag
1 years ago
Posted

usualy i dont write any reviews but let me try. Over all the story is very good, the pacing is a bit slow but it dosent get repetertive and because it is slow paced the worldbuilding is already pretty fleged out, for example one whole chapter is dedicated to it. The characters are also very unique, but there are some characters, at the time only one in my oppinion, that are mentioned and appeare in one or two chapters but are kind of forgotten? Anyways that can change in the future. Continuing with the writing style, ithink it is very refreshing to read a novel that has a big variety in terms of descriptions. The last thing i think is also a huge plus, is that the powersystem or story overall is redicuolus but there is logic behindert it, which let it seem that those abileties and powers are justified and not only existing because it is a reicarnation novel with a system. Btw English is not my first language, so exuse me if there are and mistakes.

Lucas_Freitag
Lucas_Freitag
1 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter:D

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