an absolute wild ride to chapter 1. i loved the storytelling view and the transition into pov
regain your former reputation
I will make a name for myself once more, even if it means that I have to kill the demon lord myself. I've been in the shadows for ten years with nothing to show for it.
Fantasy · Kota_Sama
nice entrance
Sitting inside of a tavern at a table on the left side of the room was a man with long, wavy white hair that reached his shoulders. Dark blue eyes, a scar across his cheek, wearing a a trench coat that was custom fit to go over his knight armor.
Fantasy · Kota_Sama
oh that's a really nice way to start off a storytelling scene
"Dad are you going to tell us about the other heroes too?" A boy asks with a bit of excitement in his voice.
Fantasy · Kota_Sama
ooh a smart one
Taking inspiration from legendary generals and even combining it with bits of magic which wasn't seen as possible at the time, he became the most famous of them all.
Fantasy · Kota_Sama
ooh mysterious sounds good
It was said that these heroes were born from the strongest of families but no one could ever figure out who the family was. Usually it's better off that way so no one can be harmed.
Fantasy · Kota_Sama
All until the Great King Astaltes stepped up to bring about the age of heroes, bringing people from all over the different continents to stop these demons.
Fantasy · Kota_Sama
thank you for reading and for the review❤️I'm not sure how far you read but in his past life, Chi Cheng was a human at first too before he became a Celestial Beast so his humanity side never left him. now that he lost some memories and his cultivation abilities, he's also influenced by the original soul's feelings so he is more human currently.
Jian Mingyu's bond is still in him. he needs Jian Mingyu to relinquish that bond before he can be free but... Grandmaster can forcefully break it but it will be very risky
interested about this left hand
The other heroes have been making way against the generals but I didn't want to just take out a general since they can be replaced easily. The Demon Lords left hand man was mine and I would make sure he died in the process.
The Forgotten S Class Hero
Fantasy · Kota_Sama