Kumitzin

Kumitzin

male LV 11

I love writing, but more than anything I love entertaining people. Creating stories for books or games has always been my passion. I'm always open for constructive criticism .

2020-10-28 Bergabung Mexico
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Kumitzin
Kumitzin
2 years ago
Posted

Overall it's a good story, but it needs work, especially from a native-english proofreader. I'll revise once that happens.

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
2 years ago
Commented

repetitive...

Her feet were indeed bare, as the discussions had said, and she was not wearing any shoes.

I am a Scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror!

I am a Scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror!

Fantasy · Laughter and Joy

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
2 years ago
Replied to Relhak

I loved it. Thank you very much for your glorious review :D. I'm going to show it off to my friends XD.[img=update][img=recommend]

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
2 years ago
Replied to Maple_of_the_Dawn

I'm glad you like my story so much. I don't know in what chapter you're at, but I promise you that the 3rd arc is amazing :D

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
3 years ago
Posted

The author is able to portray a teenage girl (and the awkwardness that comes with it) to the dot. It's well written but the story simply isn't my cup of tea. Characters are well written, but there are a few times where that action and dialogs don't match, but that's my view. Read it and see for yourselves.

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
3 years ago
Commented

Dressed in furniture? like Slighorn in HP?

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Kumitzin
Kumitzin
3 years ago
Commented

This line just blew my mind. I was sure I was reading a normal fic until BOOM! have you seen Glass?

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Morphing Iniquity

Morphing Iniquity

Teen · Tailrs ink

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
3 years ago
Posted

This story is so different from anything else I've seen on this site that it actually took me a while to pick up, but it is certainly worth it. It's the l¿onlook fo life of a guy with split personalities, however he is much more than just his syndrom. The characters are incredibly well developed, and the story flows almost seamlessly (I blame the system for the formatting, not the author). If you want to read something different and truly look into the soul of a person, this is the book for you.

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
3 years ago
Replied to Cristofer_Montes

I'll work on my descriptions for the third part :D

Kumitzin
Kumitzin
3 years ago
Posted

More than a novel, this feels like a book to make you reflect on your childhood and the ups and downs of life. It starts slow but picks up soon after. Truly a story to keep up with

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