That Zee is a naughty girl. My kind of character.
God, I can just feel she's gonna cause something bad to happen. Stay home, girl
And so, wanting something lucky to happen, Zee was going to sneak out of the estate and into the city square to touch the world shard during the eclipse.
Sci-fi · Eric_Blackmore_5616
Yeah, because when we are eating our food are our best friends. When we have to the reaping...well, that's when things change
All of her enemies would fall to her wrath. Her heart raced, and she shouted a war cry, diving headlong into the fray, her scythe a blur, attacking the enemy with all her might. Someone laughed loudly in a deep voice next to her, drawing her from her battle trance.
Sci-fi · Eric_Blackmore_5616
Zee is so adorable.
Kids never seem to want what their parents expect of them. Poor Alister
Cylia placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder. "What's on your mind, dear?" Cylia asked softly. He turned to his wife, looking into her light brown eyes. "I'm worried Zee likes combat a little too much. Just look at her. I doubt she will want to follow family tradition and pick a non combat class like us?" Alister said, his stomach clenching in worry.
Sci-fi · Eric_Blackmore_5616
The name sounds awesome. Nature. Gosh, I wish I was this creative with names.
Alister Viotti sat in a plush lawn chair next to his wife in their backyard. The backyard was rather small compared to the size of their estate, leading to a hundred-foot cliff with a cave opening. The cliff top was bathed in the sunset's light, tinging the rock a light red with hints of orange.
Sci-fi · Eric_Blackmore_5616
Both. There are two main characters in the story.
Thank you for staying with me this far. It means a lot to me
Scarlet – I don’t know why
Fantasy · Chantielu
I found what you were reffering to. Thanks for the heads up. I'll have it changed. Let me know if you see that on your end.
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Fantasy · Chantielu
I was a bit intrigued by the cover of Starbound Sorceress. The picture definitely shows my envision of Zee. The author did a wonderful job in introducing her to his readers. She didn't have much of a reaction to the inciting incident, though. It was like 'oh, I have a spirit. that's totally normal'. I wished she had shown some kind of realistic emotions to her surroundings. Regardless, I like her. Obviously, since I am a huge fan of morally grey characters. Her companion spirit is my list of favorite thing in the story. The interaction between the two got me smiling. Top tier to the banter. Totally a good read
Star Bound Sorcerous
Sci-fi · Eric_Blackmore_5616