Dang, I liked this fanfic. This kinda ruined it for me. Welp, I've loved the fanfic so far, but this is where we part ways, Author. Let me just say this, the fanfic was great and I'm gonna leave a great review in a bit.
Uncharacteristic Hatred? Does Toga have it too???? What is this HATRED? But how???? It was supposed to be only in Kimika??? WHAT THE F**K???
MHA: Time Manipulator
Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom
Are you saying Toga has hatred?
And finally, the third function... if you can call it that. It's an experimental technology that literally shuts down your body. Any attempts to get up, activate your quirk, or use Hatred... become impossible. Though, I must admit, there are some nuances to it.
MHA: Time Manipulator
Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom
Hope Toga doesn't have hatred as well or smth.
"Hmm, so it really is in you too... I wasn't wrong to be cautious. Well then, now that you can no longer pretend to be asleep and can clearly see the situation you're in, maybe we can finally talk? Though, of course, don't worry, I have plenty of time... just like you do. So we can start the conversation whenever you wish, but..." Nezu didn't finish, as the paralyzed Toga, lying before him, sharply interrupted him.
MHA: Time Manipulator
Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom
So aggressive ;-;
"I'm Aron, the new guy," I introduced myself.
X-Force: Beyond Omega
Anime & Comics · UnknownMaster
So far, nothing has changed. I thought this would different from watching the show itself.
But, he isn't whining? He's simply stating the obvious that canon has changed.
Canon has already changed. Not in noticeable ways but it already had begun. First he's not the smart child that Ekko used to be. He didn't have the same talent for tinkering that Ekko had.
Arcane: Echoes of Eternity
TV · Kaito_Uzumaki
But then she would be using their DNA and not hers, so it wouldn't exactly be Kimika and toga's kid, more like Kimika's and whoever she transformed into, which is kinda weird.
"You know, Kimi... We'll always be together. Just the two of us, no one else. We don't need crime anymore. We'll forget about Tokima and Tsukima. And all the heroes and detectives will forget us. We'll just be... happy. You and me, far, far away, just for ourselves. Maybe in some small apartment or a house by the sea. Yes, by the sea... It will be peaceful there, warm, and we'll be together every day, like family. Without any worries. We'll have little white kittens, just like you, who'll play and run around us."
MHA: Time Manipulator
Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom
i have question Author, will she actually be controlled by Toga? please tell me
Toga couldn't help but think about it, feeling her inner resolve strengthen with each thought. She imagined her friend becoming stronger and stronger, faster and faster, even invincible. In her mind, she began to devise training routines that would help uncover new abilities and unlock her full potential. Kimika could become like a battle monster — unstoppable and powerful, and most importantly, completely under her control.
MHA: Time Manipulator
Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom
can you elaborate what you mean by this?
"Ah," Goten yelled out as he was hit by Trunk's Double buster.
Dragon Ball The Next
Anime & Comics · Linn_Thit_6164
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original SCP Foundation - The Beast's Feast
Waking up in a fantasy world with nothing with her name and a collar around her neck. Elowyn thought things couldn't get worse, but, oh, how wrong she was. [ A/N: Disclaimer, the Main Character isn’t a good person. They’re not a “villain”, they’re a monster, nothing will be considered too far for her. I’m saying don’t be surprised if they eat babies or something. Warning ahead, so you can now turn back if this is too much. ]1 Chs 16 Koleksi
- original
BNHA: The Price For Peace
In World of Heroes and Villains, Only One Person Can Save Humanity From Themselves "This Is The Story of How Shinkoji Becomes the Greatest Hero In The World!"1 Chs 12 Koleksi
- original
In The SCP Foundation As An Exorcist
In the depths of the enigmatic SCP Foundation, where anomalies and mysteries abound, a young girl named Medusa Ward finds herself caught in the intricate web of the supernatural. Unbeknownst to them, Medusa is not an ordinary child, but a reincarnator, a soul reborn into a new body from a previous existence. As she navigates the labyrinthine corridors and secretive chambers of the Foundation, Medusa's journey intertwines with that of various SCPs, each with their own unique stories and powers. From encounters with sentient entities to unexplained phenomena, her path is fraught with danger and intrigue. As Medusa embraces her role as an anomaly herself, she learns to harness her newfound abilities and navigate the complex network of alliances and rivalries within the Foundation. Along the way, she encounters both allies and adversaries, forming unexpected friendships and facing formidable foes. Prepare to embark on a thrilling journey where the line between reality and the extraordinary blurs, and the true nature of Medusa's existence is revealed. [A/N: This is a test run to see if my writing is too boring or too long.] Disclaimer; I don't own any of the SCP foundation. I only own my oc.4 Chs 123 Koleksi
- original
Seven Deadly Sins: Twist of Fate
The Seven Deadly Sins defeat the Demon King and Supreme Goddess in the original narrative and live happily ever after. What if another character was introduced into the story? What if this character was a demon with the power to alter the course of their story? Watch as Moirai, the inquisitive monster, unwittingly alters the course of the world. Except for Moirai, I don't own any of the characters in my novel.3 Chs 27 Koleksi
I find the story to be interesting, from Toga manipulating the MC's emotions, which I understand that some don't like, but I find it to be a interesting take on a MHA fanfic. I do hope that the MC takes more control of her life and her own actions rather than being subconsciously influenced by Toga, but it's a good fanfic in my opinion. Of course, there were so issues, but I feel like the Writing Quality, Updates, Story Development, and World Background are pretty good. Only problem I would have would be with the Character Design of Kimika(Think that's how you spell it, alr forgot). Wish she was more independent since it feels like from start to where I'm currently at Chapter 54, she has been under the influence of another person. Whether that be the Goddess, Toga or Hatred.
MHA: Time Manipulator
Anime & Comics · Zoi4erom